For You | Teen Ink

For You

September 10, 2009
By Anonymous

I’ve come to find you in my line of sight.
I’ve come to find myself giving you my heart.
I can’t believe it’s happening so fast.

And now I’ve found
Myself crying out
For you

Chorus:
Now my hearts not so divided
Ever since you and I united
And I could
And I would
Yes I’d fly
For you.

I’ve come to find you starring in my dreams.
I’ve come to find myself smiling constantly.
I can’t believe how much I want it to last.

I can’t keep myself occupied
Long enough to get you off of my mind
I’ve found my reason to live

And now I’ve found
Myself crying out
For you

Chorus

I’ve now a reason to smile
And my hearts now not so fragile
And I feel so much stronger,
The longer I’m with you

Now my hearts not so divided
Ever since you and I united
And I could
And I would
Yes I’d fly
I would fly
For you.


The author's comments:
I am really shy when it comes to writing songs. This is the first one I've ever even KIND OF liked. So tell me what you think. Be honest and be brutal. Thank you!

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on Apr. 18 2010 at 7:11 pm
ChocolateEyes07 BRONZE, Boise, Idaho
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Favorite Quote:
Don't tell me the sky is the limit when there are footprints on the moon

Keep it up thats amazing!

Drastic_Love said...
on Feb. 28 2010 at 4:35 pm
I Loved It Alot..Keep Writing!

on Feb. 20 2010 at 7:39 pm
PeaveLoveMe SILVER, Deland, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"I shall never give up, make believe is too much fun."

OMG! You really need to write more! BEAUTIFUL! (: Would you mind me and a friend putting notes to it and making a song of it? wouldn't change lyrics or take credit for them (:

on Jan. 2 2010 at 10:12 am
dreamer112 GOLD, Burnsville, Minnesota
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Your song is lovely. :)

on Dec. 11 2009 at 2:09 pm
jesse.hunt1234 BRONZE, Nowhere, Ohio
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i agree it better than than one thats before you! i really like it you should show ur name!!!!!1

Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Dec. 11 2009 at 1:12 pm
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)

this is sooo awesome. y r u anonymous, u should show the world who u r. u've got talent :)

on Nov. 13 2009 at 11:02 am
TamaraN PLATINUM, Kalispell, Montana
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AMAZING..................

p3group3 said...
on Sep. 29 2009 at 9:32 am
We thought that it was a very moving song. We think has the potential to become a real song. Keep up the great work! Keep writing songs! You rock!