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Who's To Blame?

I feel like I'm losing you
You're slipping away
So far away, away from me
I don't know what to do
I didn't know it'll be this hard

You knew my intentions
You knew they were good
Agreeing with my views
You helped make the decision
But seems like everything

Chorus:
It's turning around
Falling apart
Don't make a sound
We're too scared
To change what we knew
Thought that we were
Doing the good
We don't know what to do
Now that everything's changed
Will we stay the same?
Who's to blame?

Follow through just do it
We're renewing our claims
Our problem's still the same
Hanging around just to see
How far this could go

How far till someone hurts
Pretending like nothing's change
We fall apart in this game
Feeling like we made a mistake
Either way this will stay



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Chazzy said...
Feb. 22, 2011 at 8:01 pm:
Would you mind if I actually put some music to this and we can become Music partners? That would be AWESOME! and how old are you?
 
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xsassysydx said...
Feb. 20, 2011 at 2:34 pm:
i think someone should actually sing this song. i've never been able to right good song lyrics but i really apreciate music and the lyrics in songs. i think a lot of people would be able to relate to this, its rlly good
 
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e@gles16 said...
Feb. 5, 2011 at 8:57 am:
totally awesome:)
 
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BROKEN* said...
Jan. 29, 2011 at 10:28 pm:
I LIKE THIS
 
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LilMacDizzle said...
Jan. 7, 2011 at 9:12 am:

wat tune did u use to write this

 

 
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cantabile said...
Dec. 21, 2010 at 8:08 pm:
It relates to what is happening to me right now. It was great. Thanks for the great song!
 
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Janejane said...
Dec. 16, 2010 at 7:47 pm:
I sang it to my own tune...haha i failed but i luv the lyrics and im sure the orignal tune is perfect...i couldnt do it though.... haha
 
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Xadon said...
Dec. 16, 2010 at 5:34 pm:
I sang this.
 
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Thomas S. said...
Nov. 11, 2010 at 8:07 am:
This waas good i really liked it...
 
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omniscient said...
Nov. 2, 2010 at 3:34 pm:
this is so good=b i love it alot!!
 
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Tayrodactyl said...
Oct. 11, 2010 at 4:00 pm:
i liked this a lot, i try writting songs, but they aren't as good as this. maybe you could read my work when its done being aproved...?
 
the_unheard replied...
Dec. 16, 2010 at 3:52 pm :
Hey, I'll give you feedback on your songs if you check mine out and give me some feedback.
 
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bayleegurl said...
Apr. 18, 2010 at 10:27 am:
I sang this just for fun. it iz rully goood
 
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Bella913 said...
Mar. 24, 2010 at 6:56 am:
i really like this piece!!! its so good and inspirational. keep writing <3
 
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rebeldiamond1313kd said...
Jan. 26, 2010 at 4:26 pm:
This is really good..
 
indiecaligurl replied...
Mar. 9, 2010 at 6:14 pm :
Thanks so much! :)
 
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Mally01 said...
Jan. 26, 2010 at 4:17 pm:
WOW... this is really good...Do mind checking out my work? It would really help me to know what people think! Thnx!
 
indiecaligurl replied...
Mar. 9, 2010 at 6:08 pm :
Thank you! I sure will!
 
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MaowMaddi This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 17, 2010 at 6:39 pm:
I wrote something similar to this having to do with my family a couple of years ago. It was not as developed as your piece is though. Just wondering,where did you get your inspiration from?
 
indiecaligurl replied...
Mar. 9, 2010 at 6:12 pm :
Thank you! I just get inspired from everyday hardships, problems with friends, family, relationships...stuff like that. :)
 
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