Who's To Blame?

September 21, 2009
By indiecaligurl PLATINUM, Long Beach, California
indiecaligurl PLATINUM, Long Beach, California
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I feel like I'm losing you
You're slipping away
So far away, away from me
I don't know what to do
I didn't know it'll be this hard

You knew my intentions
You knew they were good
Agreeing with my views
You helped make the decision
But seems like everything

Chorus:
It's turning around
Falling apart
Don't make a sound
We're too scared
To change what we knew
Thought that we were
Doing the good
We don't know what to do
Now that everything's changed
Will we stay the same?
Who's to blame?

Follow through just do it
We're renewing our claims
Our problem's still the same
Hanging around just to see
How far this could go

How far till someone hurts
Pretending like nothing's change
We fall apart in this game
Feeling like we made a mistake
Either way this will stay


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on Feb. 25 2011 at 8:54 am
jordian1 BRONZE, Albion, Iowa
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i like how easily this song is to relate to. its great!

Chazzy BRONZE said...
on Feb. 22 2011 at 8:01 pm
Chazzy BRONZE, North Charleston, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
you wont get to see the rainbow, unless you go through the rain

Would you mind if I actually put some music to this and we can become Music partners? That would be AWESOME! and how old are you?

on Feb. 20 2011 at 2:34 pm
xsassysydx GOLD, Boiceville, New York
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Favorite Quote:
“To be a star, you must shine your own light, follow your own path, and don't worry about the darkness, for that is when the stars shine brightest”

i think someone should actually sing this song. i've never been able to right good song lyrics but i really apreciate music and the lyrics in songs. i think a lot of people would be able to relate to this, its rlly good

on Feb. 5 2011 at 8:57 am
KrsytalnBlake14 BRONZE, Vinemont, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
Our love grows stronger every lifetime that passes us through.. (:

totally awesome:)

BROKEN* said...
on Jan. 29 2011 at 10:28 pm
I LIKE THIS

on Jan. 7 2011 at 9:12 am
LilMacDizzle BRONZE, Andover, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
Lifes short buy the shoes

wat tune did u use to write this

 


on Dec. 21 2010 at 8:08 pm
cantabile BRONZE, Boerne, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"We walk by faith not by sight" 2 Corrinthians 5:7
Let it come to you

It relates to what is happening to me right now. It was great. Thanks for the great song!

on Dec. 16 2010 at 7:47 pm
ASongInTheSky SILVER, Hamilton, Montana
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Favorite Quote:
don't jump off a cliff, unless you want to. Friendship is like peeing your pants, everone can see it but only you get the warm feeling that it brings.

I sang it to my own tune...haha i failed but i luv the lyrics and im sure the orignal tune is perfect...i couldnt do it though.... haha

Xadon BRONZE said...
on Dec. 16 2010 at 5:34 pm
Xadon BRONZE, Cheney, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
"Joy, something that is found in small cracks and hiding places that we can only see when our eyes are closed"---Me. ( Yeah, i made myself a quote deal with it.)

I sang this.

on Dec. 16 2010 at 3:52 pm
the_unheard BRONZE, Eau Claire, Wisconsin
3 articles 1 photo 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
If it's worth it, chase it and when you catch it, never let it go. - Me

Hey, I'll give you feedback on your songs if you check mine out and give me some feedback.

on Nov. 11 2010 at 8:07 am
Thomas Stover, Cleveland, Ohio
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This waas good i really liked it...

on Nov. 2 2010 at 3:34 pm
omniscient BRONZE, Roseburg, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
time heals all wounds. even a real good time- some rodeo dude said this

this is so good=b i love it alot!!

on Oct. 11 2010 at 4:00 pm
Tayrodactyl PLATINUM, Palmyra, Indiana
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i liked this a lot, i try writting songs, but they aren't as good as this. maybe you could read my work when its done being aproved...?

bayleem GOLD said...
on Apr. 18 2010 at 10:27 am
bayleem GOLD, Yarmouth, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
"Best Friends are like bras: close to your heart and there for support.”

I sang this just for fun. it iz rully goood

on Mar. 24 2010 at 6:56 am
Bella913 SILVER, New City, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Death is easy, living is harder."

i really like this piece!!! its so good and inspirational. keep writing <3

on Mar. 9 2010 at 6:14 pm
indiecaligurl PLATINUM, Long Beach, California
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Thanks so much! :)

on Mar. 9 2010 at 6:12 pm
indiecaligurl PLATINUM, Long Beach, California
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Thank you! I just get inspired from everyday hardships, problems with friends, family, relationships...stuff like that. :)

on Mar. 9 2010 at 6:08 pm
indiecaligurl PLATINUM, Long Beach, California
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Thank you! I sure will!

on Jan. 26 2010 at 4:26 pm
rebeldiamond1313kd GOLD, Franklin, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"If you look in the mirror and don't like what you see. You can find out first hand what it's like to be me!" -"The End." -My Chemical Romance

This is really good..

Mally01 SILVER said...
on Jan. 26 2010 at 4:17 pm
Mally01 SILVER, Dameron, Other
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Favorite Quote:
If you love something set it free, If it comes back to you it's yours. If it does not return nnit is not yours and never was.

WOW... this is really good...Do mind checking out my work? It would really help me to know what people think! Thnx!


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