It's Okay

September 21, 2009
You say it’s okay
But really it’s not
Inside dying decay
Outside you’ve fought

It’s a two sided
Heck of a mask
You’ve confided
To finish the task

Sing to me………….
Talk to me…………..
Like you see……….
What I’ll be……….

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Hulagirl808 said...
Jan. 20, 2015 at 4:10 am
I like it. Short and sweet.
DaphneeBee143 said...
Feb. 20, 2013 at 12:22 pm
it doesnt have many complete thoughts.. but it keeps me thinking.. good job
yoitsme said...
Jul. 7, 2011 at 8:28 pm
I love how you use such short thoughts... and the way you don't really complete each bit makes people keep thinking about it... I really like it...
kms777 said...
Aug. 11, 2010 at 4:18 pm
wow this is great i love poems that are short but still it speaks so much. and its so easy to relate 2. i have sum short 1s 2 but there not as good as this i hope ull read them and giv me sum  hints on how to make them better
inovermyhead said...
Jun. 19, 2010 at 12:37 am

I love it,


Keep onn writing(((((:

Bella913 said...
Mar. 24, 2010 at 6:58 am
its reallt nice, short and sweet!!
Cady_ said...
Nov. 26, 2009 at 2:18 am
sad darkness replied...
Mar. 10, 2010 at 3:22 pm
this is awesome i write like this a lot check them out when they are up!
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