True Love In You

September 21, 2009
By indiecaligurl PLATINUM, Long Beach, California
indiecaligurl PLATINUM, Long Beach, California
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Your eyes scan the sea of faces
Makes you think of different places
Waves and locks of golden brown
You say hello without making a sound
Search for all you long for
Maybe you'll be able to explore
What true love is to you
And what it means to me too
Life is too short to wait
To sit around and leave it to fate
So take it into your own hands
And make the most of what you can
Love and its transcending light
Watch it shine so pure and bright
Now gather all that you've found
You say I love you without making a sound
And through this journey I hope you can see all I do
Shows that I've also found love, true love in you.


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on Apr. 14 2012 at 9:28 pm
elizabethlong BRONZE, Chambersburg, Pennsylvania
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Loved it!!!!!!!!

undone said...
on Jun. 11 2011 at 3:36 pm
undone, Dfhfhjgtyiuj, Wyoming
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THIS is a AWSOME song!!!

on Apr. 2 2011 at 8:21 am
summermarrie BRONZE, Tobyhanna,pa, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
live well laugh offten love much.... cry less love alot be happy... if you love something or someone so much let it go if it comes back it was ment to be....

wow i relly loved it keep it up! :)

on Mar. 14 2011 at 10:20 pm
P03tryPunk BRONZE, Delray Beach, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet. -Plato

Awesome Job! Love the way you ryhmed but the poem still flowed ot wasn't too ryhmy lol...great job...keep it up!

kms777 GOLD said...
on Aug. 11 2010 at 4:20 pm
kms777 GOLD, Winn, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"learn from your mistakes but regret not a thing"

wow. amazing. and love poems r the best. every1 can relate to those i hope ull read some of mine and give me sum ideas on how to make mine better

on Jun. 2 2010 at 1:19 pm
I knowtested that this song thing is writen about love... it is beatiful lol... GRRR... i love it lol

on May. 11 2010 at 6:58 am
Bella913 SILVER, New City, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Death is easy, living is harder."

b-e-a-utiful! keep writing.

on Apr. 21 2010 at 12:08 pm
BEAUTIFUL!!! Keep it up!!! :)

laaeira BRONZE said...
on Apr. 1 2010 at 8:21 pm
laaeira BRONZE, Kilgore, Texas
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beautiful

on Mar. 24 2010 at 7:00 am
Bella913 SILVER, New City, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Death is easy, living is harder."

one word,BEAUTIFUL

rawrdinosaur said...
on Mar. 23 2010 at 5:55 pm
speaking of real song me an mu friend just started a band and we are wondering if we can use it i would need your name to give u credit and it would eventually be on youtube. oh and our band name is KissinFate

on Mar. 6 2010 at 5:00 pm
Saphira96 SILVER, Crestwood, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
I have 3 but here they are:
Truly Great friends are hard to find, difficult to leave, and impossible to forget.
Life isn't measured by the number of breaths you take but by the moments that take your breath away. And the only problem is time.

Wow that was a really pretty song! I loved it! It made me feel love and you really got your point across! If this became a real song, it would be a hit!

BriiF PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 16 2010 at 12:47 pm
BriiF PLATINUM, Akeley, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"He who spends time regretting the past loses the present and risks the future." ~Francisco de Quevedo "You shall love your crooked neighbor with your crooked heart." ~W.H. Auden

I really loved the message in this poem. It really was very sweet and made me think of the innocent kind of school yard romance I had when I was little. Good job!

on Oct. 29 2009 at 3:08 am
indiecaligurl PLATINUM, Long Beach, California
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Thank you!

on Sep. 30 2009 at 2:48 pm
sarahgrace BRONZE, Westminster, Maryland
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That's a really sweet poem. Good Job!


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