True Love In You

September 21, 2009
Your eyes scan the sea of faces
Makes you think of different places
Waves and locks of golden brown
You say hello without making a sound
Search for all you long for
Maybe you'll be able to explore
What true love is to you
And what it means to me too
Life is too short to wait
To sit around and leave it to fate
So take it into your own hands
And make the most of what you can
Love and its transcending light
Watch it shine so pure and bright
Now gather all that you've found
You say I love you without making a sound
And through this journey I hope you can see all I do
Shows that I've also found love, true love in you.

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elizabethlong said...
Apr. 14, 2012 at 9:28 pm
Loved it!!!!!!!!
undone said...
Jun. 11, 2011 at 3:36 pm
THIS is a AWSOME song!!!
summermarrie said...
Apr. 2, 2011 at 8:21 am
wow i relly loved it keep it up! :)
P03tryPunk said...
Mar. 14, 2011 at 10:20 pm
Awesome Job! Love the way you ryhmed but the poem still flowed ot wasn't too ryhmy lol...great job...keep it up!
kms777 said...
Aug. 11, 2010 at 4:20 pm
wow. amazing. and love poems r the best. every1 can relate to those i hope ull read some of mine and give me sum ideas on how to make mine better
MickyBob... OH YA! said...
Jun. 2, 2010 at 1:19 pm
I knowtested that this song thing is writen about love... it is beatiful lol... GRRR... i love it lol
pitbullsloveme said...
Apr. 21, 2010 at 12:08 pm
BEAUTIFUL!!! Keep it up!!! :)
laaeira said...
Apr. 1, 2010 at 8:21 pm
Bella913 said...
Mar. 24, 2010 at 7:00 am
one word,BEAUTIFUL
rawrdinosaur said...
Mar. 23, 2010 at 5:55 pm
speaking of real song me an mu friend just started a band and we are wondering if we can use it i would need your name to give u credit and it would eventually be on youtube. oh and our band name is KissinFate
Saphira96 said...
Mar. 6, 2010 at 5:00 pm
Wow that was a really pretty song! I loved it! It made me feel love and you really got your point across! If this became a real song, it would be a hit!
BriiBunny said...
Feb. 16, 2010 at 12:47 pm
I really loved the message in this poem. It really was very sweet and made me think of the innocent kind of school yard romance I had when I was little. Good job!
Sarah W. said...
Sept. 30, 2009 at 2:48 pm
That's a really sweet poem. Good Job!
indiecaligurl replied...
Oct. 29, 2009 at 3:08 am
Thank you!
Bella913 replied...
May 11, 2010 at 6:58 am
b-e-a-utiful! keep writing.
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