Heartbeat

September 20, 2009
By omgimaninja07 BRONZE, Laflin, Pennsylvania
omgimaninja07 BRONZE, Laflin, Pennsylvania
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Heartbeat/ You always keep beating/ Always keep going/ Always continue/ Heartbeat/ Even when you are broken/ You always keep racing/ Wish I was like you/ But I'm only human/ And when I am broken/ I will stay broken/ I will keep crying/ And sometimes/ I have to stop beating/ My rhythm gets broken/ Sometimes I stop trying/ I can't be that strong/ It's always hard/ To carry on/ To go that far/ I can't always last/ Sometimes I must stop and think/ WIsh I could be as strong as you/ 'Cause a heartbeat never stops/ Never misses a beat/ And I'm just not that strong/ No matter how much I wish I could be/ I just cannot win/ The best I can do is endure/ I guess I could always quit/ But what good would that be for?

The author's comments:
I have some kind of obsession with heartbeats,I don't know. They kind of fastinate me, I guess... you know, people's hearts get broken all the time, but the heartbeat just keeps going. It never even stops for a beat, and I wish I could be like that.

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on May. 16 2011 at 7:31 am
dancergurl22 BRONZE, Grand Junction, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Love, like you can't get hurt
Dance, like no one's watching
Live, like there's no tomorrow

I LOVE THIS!

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on Apr. 27 2010 at 10:04 pm
xxxxx, Taneytown, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
I cannot forgive my friends for dying: I do not find these vanishing acts of theirs at all amusing.

- Logan Pearsall Smith

This is marvelous! I love the way you intertwined the image of a consistant heartbeat inside an inconsistant person. It really is a completely wonderful concept! Keep on writing and working with poetry! You are talented, and it really shines! =)

Grace09 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 29 2009 at 9:23 pm
Grace09 BRONZE, Colorado City, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"You have a heart of gold, but so does a hard boiled egg." By: I can't remember.

I love it!!! Hang in there:). Keep writing, you're very talented!

on Sep. 29 2009 at 1:30 pm
hello we are two differnt girls and anyways i like your song and its very sad...so i can tellyou like this guy and i dont know the story but yeh i liked the song more if you wrote more haha well jkjk and im sorry): and yeh well i like your song

on Sep. 29 2009 at 9:32 am
We thought it was very emotional times. but very intersting.


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