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when our hands touch

By , 511634, Afghanistan
when our hands touch,
when they meet.
when we both think it's time,
to stop livin in yesterday.
when it's time to say,
our last goodbyes.
i'll be gone by sunrise.
so while you toss and turn and try to sleep tonight,
i hope you learned that this whole time I was right.



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sillygirl880 said...
Dec. 15, 2010 at 6:38 pm:
YES thasts wat people are looking for out there you should add some more to it but ovetrall its realy goood!!:)
 
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--Morganne[: said...
Nov. 17, 2009 at 5:07 pm:
This is a really good start. You should add some more to it!
 
lolchick replied...
Nov. 22, 2009 at 9:20 am :
thanks i think i am an okay writer.
you should check out some more of my stuff
 
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