i'm with you

September 18, 2009
By tori_Lou GOLD, Wolfforth, Texas
tori_Lou GOLD, Wolfforth, Texas
18 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
when life knocks you on your knees, you're in perfect position to pray


When life rains on you
dont give up, we'll make it through.
'cuz in the darkness there is a light
and you'll find the strength to get through the night.
i'm with you
child, i'm with you


The author's comments:
this is a song about the struggles we face every day and how God is always there to help us through the darkness and when we stumble.

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mizz.tyia said...
on Jun. 3 2010 at 2:36 pm
that was hert warming i could relate to the words

Zoeybird96 said...
on Oct. 8 2009 at 1:59 pm
Ok well if you do let me know

tori_Lou GOLD said...
on Oct. 7 2009 at 5:29 pm
tori_Lou GOLD, Wolfforth, Texas
18 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
when life knocks you on your knees, you're in perfect position to pray

hmmmmmmmm i not sure hmmmmmmmmmmmm i cant think of anything

Zoeybird96 said...
on Oct. 5 2009 at 7:01 pm
anytime. i just wish that we had a way to comuancate beside teenink. oh well i wish that other people had a talent in writing like us. i am working on a piece of writing but dont know what to call it maybe you could help me. it is about this girl and how she is reliveing the day of her mothers murder and the years to come. its like a flashback story but i cant find a really good title. do you have and ideas???? Thanks

Your 'friend'

Zoeybird96

tori_Lou GOLD said...
on Oct. 5 2009 at 6:50 pm
tori_Lou GOLD, Wolfforth, Texas
18 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
when life knocks you on your knees, you're in perfect position to pray

thank you soo much i appreciate the kind words

Zoeybird96 said...
on Oct. 5 2009 at 3:56 pm
i have also gone through a hard time and i turned to God also. i also turned to writing. i write out my feelings still to this day and the hard time was about 5 years ago. writing is my passion. you have a talent, so dont let it slip away from you. writing is a talent i wish everyone had. it is so great to have cause you can make any thing possible. just dont stop writing cause you are amazing at it!!!!

your 'friend'

Zoeybird96

tori_Lou GOLD said...
on Oct. 3 2009 at 3:27 pm
tori_Lou GOLD, Wolfforth, Texas
18 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
when life knocks you on your knees, you're in perfect position to pray

i went thru a reeely hard time were i felt alone and just covered in darkness then i found my ligh in god and was inspired to write

Zoeybird96 said...
on Oct. 3 2009 at 2:44 pm
That is great. Where did you get your insperation?

Tori Sue said...
on Oct. 3 2009 at 12:25 pm
thanx=D i am still working on it so i will post the rest when it is done

Miyo said...
on Sep. 30 2009 at 1:27 pm
the song has a lot of passion. and i could really feel what the words mean. CHOW!!!!!

Zoeybird96 said...
on Sep. 30 2009 at 1:26 pm
that song is so true. i love how it is short. maybe you could add some more verses with different meanings but they all tie together.


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