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When life rains on you
dont give up, we'll make it through.
'cuz in the darkness there is a light
and you'll find the strength to get through the night.
i'm with you
child, i'm with you





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Miyo said...
Sept. 30, 2009 at 1:27 pm
the song has a lot of passion. and i could really feel what the words mean. CHOW!!!!!
 
mizz.tyia replied...
Jun. 3, 2010 at 2:36 pm
that was hert warming i could relate to the words
 
Zoeybird96 said...
Sept. 30, 2009 at 1:26 pm
that song is so true. i love how it is short. maybe you could add some more verses with different meanings but they all tie together.
 
Tori Sue replied...
Oct. 3, 2009 at 12:25 pm
thanx=D i am still working on it so i will post the rest when it is done
 
Zoeybird96 replied...
Oct. 3, 2009 at 2:44 pm
That is great. Where did you get your insperation?
 
Tori G. replied...
Oct. 3, 2009 at 3:27 pm
i went thru a reeely hard time were i felt alone and just covered in darkness then i found my ligh in god and was inspired to write
 
Zoeybird96 replied...
Oct. 5, 2009 at 3:56 pm
i have also gone through a hard time and i turned to God also. i also turned to writing. i write out my feelings still to this day and the hard time was about 5 years ago. writing is my passion. you have a talent, so dont let it slip away from you. writing is a talent i wish everyone had. it is so great to have cause you can make any thing possible. just dont stop writing cause you are amazing at it!!!!
your 'friend'
Zoeybird96
 
Tori G. replied...
Oct. 5, 2009 at 6:50 pm
thank you soo much i appreciate the kind words
 
Zoeybird96 replied...
Oct. 5, 2009 at 7:01 pm
anytime. i just wish that we had a way to comuancate beside teenink. oh well i wish that other people had a talent in writing like us. i am working on a piece of writing but dont know what to call it maybe you could help me. it is about this girl and how she is reliveing the day of her mothers murder and the years to come. its like a flashback story but i cant find a really good title. do you have and ideas???? Thanks
Your 'friend'
Zoeybird96
 
Tori G. replied...
Oct. 7, 2009 at 5:29 pm
hmmmmmmmm i not sure hmmmmmmmmmmmm i cant think of anything
 
Zoeybird96 replied...
Oct. 8, 2009 at 1:59 pm
Ok well if you do let me know
 
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