God, Can You Hear Me?

September 18, 2009
I try to talk to you
But it's like you're not there
My words fade away
Into empty air

Can you hear me?
Can my prayer reach that far?
Do you hear one child's cry
Wherever you are?
I'm just one small voice
In a world of pain
And I'm not sure
So I'll ask again
Can you hear me?

I try to hear your voice
But you seem so far away
I know you're calling me
But I don't know what you're saying
I can't hear you

I can't hear you
I'm drowning in my sin
I try to reach for you
But I'm falling down again
One still, small voice
In a world of pain
If I try hard enough
I know I can
I can hear you

Rolling like thunder
In my once dead heart
I can hear you speaking
We were never apart
I can hear you

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Totsi said...
today at 9:17 am
Hi! This is spiritually/emotionally uplifting! thanks...
xStilesSalviatorx said...
May 18, 2016 at 12:14 pm
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Sept. 4, 2015 at 10:04 am
Beautifully written, you've got talent, thanks for sharing this with us, Keep writing.
AvengeMyBrokenSong said...
Apr. 3, 2015 at 1:25 pm
This is beautiful! @MasterPo is so right. Nice to find something Christian on here:) Beautifully written. And God definitely heard that:)
MasterPo said...
Sept. 21, 2013 at 11:11 am
Really liked it.
After so long, such a good song which is not about love and romance.
nice work (y)
Prehistoric-Fool said...
Aug. 22, 2012 at 11:53 pm
I love this... I can relate.
Krashawn said...
May 4, 2012 at 12:33 pm
Great song!!
silentpeacock said...
Feb. 6, 2012 at 6:26 pm
hes listening to you never doubt. always listening. God is omniescent (google it) and omg i could totally hear this.. on the radio
morgie21 said...
Feb. 6, 2012 at 11:25 am
I am often thinking the same thing about God, family, life in general; its like you're in my head.
chaparrita said...
Feb. 6, 2012 at 10:37 am
loved it! this is amazing, very original(:
Lillie M. said...
Feb. 6, 2012 at 4:32 am
I could almost hear the music to this. This is so beautiful . . . I feel this way sometimes, too.
scenesoccerqueen replied...
Feb. 6, 2012 at 9:42 am
Wow the way the words are placed dipict the tune! and this is almost like my cry out! very easy to relate too
EveryDayInspired said...
Nov. 10, 2011 at 9:10 pm
This is really great. Way to keep the faith in God. I actually feel this way sometimes. But I know He's there, and He is listening to me.
writer101 said...
Nov. 10, 2011 at 7:06 pm
I love it.I'd like to here someone sing it.
BlackRose21 said...
Nov. 10, 2011 at 12:02 pm
Beautiful Lyrics!!
mackrider75365 said...
Oct. 16, 2011 at 11:29 am
absolutely beautiful writing!  God Bless, amazing
FlaviusJacobiusOssummuss said...
Sept. 23, 2011 at 3:09 pm
Absolutely beautiful.  'nuff said.
bigtimefangirl24 said...
Jul. 23, 2011 at 5:49 pm
Wow! I think this is really amazing and a lot of people can relate to it. The message is also very spectacular. Love it! :)
14hipkri said...
Jul. 1, 2011 at 9:08 pm
Love it! Really good! The part were you said ''In a world of pain'' reminds me of one of my songs I wrote and uploaded into Teen Ink, I had those exact words, only in a different setting, It's really cool to see the same phrases used in different scences. (:
silence-is-loud said...
Jun. 18, 2011 at 3:29 pm
I love this!!! I especially love the ending when you say " we were never apart/I can hear you" :) keep up the good work!
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