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Somewhere over the rainbow


There's a place



Dreams come true and the things you want you don't have to chase.



Somewhere over the rainbow



There's no fear



And the wish that you hold inside comes to life right here.



But this sweet land I talk about is really just a thing of doubt,



It's unreal.



And all the scary things around don't disappear into the ground



There's no such magic.



Someday I'll find a rainbow



To live upon



All these creatures that yell and scream



Really will be gone.




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Bee.xx said...
Aug. 27, 2010 at 8:01 am:
omg this is better than the original in my opinion. just like xxhrtbreakingxx i was singing to it when i read it the another version and it suits really well. keep up the great work!!!
 
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uniquefreak3000 said...
Sept. 28, 2009 at 11:55 am:
I love the beginning and how you matched up your lyrics with the song. It fit well. During the middle, the words were a little darker and didn't match the tune so much, but then in the end, you shared your dream of a place without fear. So altogether, good lyrics. You have a knack for melodic poetry!
--Michaela
 
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xxhrtbreakingxx said...
Sept. 27, 2009 at 12:17 pm:
i love your lyrics..i was singin to the song..it was really neat what you did with it
 
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