my deadly laulaby

September 16, 2009
By Edante BRONZE, Longview, Washington
Edante BRONZE, Longview, Washington
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You broke my heart and tore me apart now look as the blood drips from my eyes how can i beleive you with all of your lies you said you loved me and would allways be there but where were you i thought you cared i would have never opened my heart to you if i knew this is what you would do i no longer know who to trust as my life slowly turns to dust i cant belive you lied my heart just died i can tell by the look in your eyes to you i am no longer alive now i cry these tears of blood slit my wrists and watch the flood i hope you can sleep at night knowing you took my life "sound of creaking noose"



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Edante BRONZE said...
on Sep. 26 2009 at 9:36 pm
Edante BRONZE, Longview, Washington
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hearing that makes me feel very good about my self

on Sep. 25 2009 at 12:44 pm
HeavenCooley GOLD, Stillwater, Oklahoma
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yes very good

chychy said...
on Sep. 23 2009 at 6:55 pm
that was awsome i felt so attached a even sang to it

on Sep. 22 2009 at 12:11 pm
that is awesome and i can totaly relate.


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