Our Love

September 13, 2009
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The smile burns through the inch of thick ice
It thaws my heart but for what price?

When you throw back your head and chuckle your smile
How long will it be till you leave, a while?

If you need me right now, i'll need you forever
So this isn't one night, its a commitment, an endeavor

If you take my hand then don't let it go
Because if you look back you wont see my bright glow

Love or leave me but don't sing a fake song
My heart's just to fragile and life's not that long

So when you look in my eyes and we feel the same way
This love is everlasting not just one day

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laineyirwin04 said...
Nov. 4, 2015 at 1:04 pm
This is a truly beautiful poem. This poem is not only relatable, but also says that the love between two people should last forever. The last line, “So when you look in my eyes and we feel the same way. This love is everlasting not just one day” is the strongest line in the poem because every single person knows what it feels like to love or to be loved.
WeOwnTheNight-Xxx said...
Jul. 12, 2011 at 7:31 am
So pretty >>xx
XxTickleM3EmoxX This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 27, 2011 at 11:42 am
i loooove this! great job! its my favorite! lawl
wackiewack said...
Feb. 9, 2011 at 6:00 pm
this poem is truely beautiful ♥
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