17 Love

September 1, 2009
[1st Verse]
Every day
& every night
everything just works out right
cuz face it
baby you and me
were ment to be

You & me

for-eber & eber
we'll stay together
'cuz this'll work
i'm sure
your all i've waited for
(& soo much more)

[2nd Verse]
17 days
17 nights
still going right
& we're stronger than ever


Foeber & eber & eber
you & me
we'll be
i'n love

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BreezetteThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sep. 15 at 1:08 pm
Good job, very impressive. I actually write songs, on the piano,Ukulele, Violin, and the Keybard. You should check out my stuff too!
SquirrelGirl2 said...
Jun. 1, 2011 at 4:44 pm
:) aww... this is cute
kaykaybeck said...
Apr. 18, 2011 at 12:39 pm
I like it (: maybe check out some of my stuff?
CWells_521 said...
Mar. 5, 2011 at 6:49 am
normgrl replied...
Apr. 18, 2011 at 11:51 am
<3 very
trblue said...
Feb. 2, 2010 at 12:03 pm
great song i give you props on just writting one.
b_swain replied...
Feb. 2, 2010 at 8:34 pm
thanks it has no music but all my songs are like that.I have about a small note book of them.
kaykay said...
Dec. 20, 2009 at 10:03 pm
that was amazing!!! great work, really. you have talent!
b_swain replied...
Feb. 2, 2010 at 8:33 pm
Thanks! It's just a hobby
Castrol said...
Nov. 6, 2009 at 11:10 am
Awww. This is real sweet. =] A perfect depiction of "young love." =]
Humming_Bird replied...
Nov. 10, 2009 at 3:56 pm
yeah thanks I wrote it while I was dating my now ex. It described how I felt towards him.
chychy said...
Sept. 23, 2009 at 10:56 pm
wow i loved it but then it ended and i wanted more i think you could add more i mean wwwooowww
Humming_Bird replied...
Sept. 24, 2009 at 3:48 pm
Thanks when I add music to it, it will be longer there will be alot of improv into it. lolZ butI haven quite got to that yet i'll keep you posted.
Nick U. said...
Sept. 23, 2009 at 8:47 pm
i like it i really do you should check out my work some time i made a song
Humming_Bird replied...
Sept. 24, 2009 at 3:47 pm
Sure things thanks for the feed back.
This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 21, 2009 at 3:33 pm
Beautiful! But you should make it longer.
Humming_Bird replied...
Sept. 21, 2009 at 3:40 pm
Thank you I'm glad that i'm finally getting ideas on stuff to work on. I'll work on it with my future songs.
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