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17 Love

[1st Verse]
Every day
& every night
everything just works out right
cuz face it
baby you and me
were ment to be

[Chorus]
You & me

for-eber & eber
we'll stay together
'cuz this'll work
i'm sure
your all i've waited for
(& soo much more)

[2nd Verse]
17 days
17 nights
everythings
still going right
& we're stronger than ever
together

[Chorus]

[Bridge]
Foeber & eber & eber
together
you & me
we'll be
i'n love



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SquirrelGirl2 said...
Jun. 1, 2011 at 4:44 pm:
:) aww... this is cute
 
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kaykaybeck said...
Apr. 18, 2011 at 12:39 pm:
I like it (: maybe check out some of my stuff?
 
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CWells_521 said...
Mar. 5, 2011 at 6:49 am:
THIS IS CUTEEE
 
normgrl replied...
Apr. 18, 2011 at 11:51 am :
<3 very
 
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trblue said...
Feb. 2, 2010 at 12:03 pm:
great song i give you props on just writting one.
 
b_swain replied...
Feb. 2, 2010 at 8:34 pm :
thanks it has no music but all my songs are like that.I have about a small note book of them.
 
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kaykay said...
Dec. 20, 2009 at 10:03 pm:
that was amazing!!! great work, really. you have talent!
 
b_swain replied...
Feb. 2, 2010 at 8:33 pm :
Thanks! It's just a hobby
 
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Castrol said...
Nov. 6, 2009 at 11:10 am:
Awww. This is real sweet. =] A perfect depiction of "young love." =]
 
Humming_Bird replied...
Nov. 10, 2009 at 3:56 pm :
yeah thanks I wrote it while I was dating my now ex. It described how I felt towards him.
 
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chychy said...
Sept. 23, 2009 at 10:56 pm:
wow i loved it but then it ended and i wanted more i think you could add more i mean wwwooowww
 
Humming_Bird replied...
Sept. 24, 2009 at 3:48 pm :
Thanks when I add music to it, it will be longer there will be alot of improv into it. lolZ butI haven quite got to that yet i'll keep you posted.
 
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Nick U. said...
Sept. 23, 2009 at 8:47 pm:
i like it i really do you should check out my work some time i made a song
 
Humming_Bird replied...
Sept. 24, 2009 at 3:47 pm :
Sure things thanks for the feed back.
 
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This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 21, 2009 at 3:33 pm:
Beautiful! But you should make it longer.
 
Humming_Bird replied...
Sept. 21, 2009 at 3:40 pm :
Thank you I'm glad that i'm finally getting ideas on stuff to work on. I'll work on it with my future songs.
 
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