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Just You

[1st Verse]
I cried
Because I couldn't talk to you
I hurt because I couldn't walk beside you
man
could this be any more real

[Chorus]
I can't dream
I can't sleep
without thinking of you
I can't wish on a star
without wisting
i'm there
with you
All I really want is
you

[2nd Verse]
I wake up in the mornin'
1st ting I do
Check my messages
all from you
soo many things we're plannin' to do

[Chorus]

[Bridge]
I said i'll wait
& thats just what i'll do
'till i can be
together with you

[Chorus]
You
Just You




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BrokenThorn said...
Oct. 11, 2011 at 7:23 pm:
Congrats on making the 2nd and 3rd most top voted song for today! I love this song, its simple but really describes emotion everyone has felt before! Comment on my first song posted here? x
 
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JasonG. said...
Apr. 18, 2011 at 11:40 am:
It's so real about love, it made me stop and really think. Keep up the good work :)
 
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Halabella said...
Nov. 15, 2010 at 2:01 pm:
That is so sweet I cried while listening to it.
 
Brittaner replied...
Nov. 15, 2010 at 8:38 pm :

Awww don't cry they're just words.

Thanks for the feed back.

 
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IAmMyself said...
Jun. 14, 2010 at 5:01 pm:
aaaaaaawwwwwww if someone wrote that for me i would think it was sweet. he's stupid
 
Brittaner replied...
Jun. 15, 2010 at 9:56 pm :
Thanks, I actually thanked them for breaking up with me a few days ago because if it wasn't for him hurting me I would have never met the awesome person I have now! Added bonus they love it when I write them songs and they're helping me with some music. Thanks for the feed back!!!1
 
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jtrina said...
Sept. 21, 2009 at 7:07 pm:
exactly how i feel!
 
Humming_Bird replied...
Sept. 25, 2009 at 1:25 pm :
Glad to know I could put a voice some one elses feelings.
 
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Dunamis O. said...
Sept. 19, 2009 at 6:57 pm:
Great job! You're writing style is awesome.
 
Humming_Bird replied...
Sept. 25, 2009 at 1:25 pm :
Thank you. I just write what I think I don't filter it & think of what sounds right & I also don't write until the words I guess you could say come to me. I guess you could call it natural or "not thinking about it"
 
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keyboard_musican said...
Sept. 18, 2009 at 2:36 pm:
that was so sweet and deep. i could really connect.
 
Bumble_Bee replied...
Sept. 19, 2009 at 12:19 pm :
Thank you. I was just a song I wrote for my (now Ex) boyfirend. Apperently It scared him. I write my feelings and don't filter them, so this is what I got.
Thanks for your comment, It's appreciated.
 
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Your_lil_Secret said...
Sept. 18, 2009 at 2:27 pm:
thats really good! keep writng
 
Bumble_Bee replied...
Sept. 19, 2009 at 12:21 pm :
Thank you. It was for my(now ex) boyfiend. I don't think i'll stop writing anytime soon. Songs are just words that haven't een sung yet, And I have alot to say.
Thank you, Your feed back it appreciated
 
Your_lil_Secret replied...
Sept. 22, 2009 at 1:56 pm :
no problem...ya i agree...
 
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Judith said...
Sept. 18, 2009 at 9:42 am:
i absolutely love this, it reminds me of me and something I'm going through. this songs great.
 
Bumble_Bee replied...
Sept. 19, 2009 at 12:22 pm :
Thank you. This was just something for my (now Ex) boyfriend that the ideas just popped into my head.
THank you, Your feedback is appreciate3d
 
Keigs2010 replied...
Sept. 21, 2009 at 3:58 pm :
i seriously just sang this hole song out in my head with music and everything AMAZING song keep it up1:)
 
Humming_Bird replied...
Sept. 21, 2009 at 4:33 pm :
thakers. I'm working on music for it on Jam Studio until I learn guitar, or piano better I've pretty much got the drum part for it down since I know how to play them some. I'm totally clueless on the rest. I'd like to hear the music you put to it. It might help and give me some ideas of what to do with it.
 
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