Just You

September 1, 2009
By Brittaner DIAMOND, Edenton, North Carolina
Brittaner DIAMOND, Edenton, North Carolina
51 articles 0 photos 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
"words are just songs without the corny elevator music behind them"
-Me (random thought)


[1st Verse]
I cried
Because I couldn't talk to you
I hurt because I couldn't walk beside you
man
could this be any more real

[Chorus]
I can't dream
I can't sleep
without thinking of you
I can't wish on a star
without wisting
i'm there
with you
All I really want is
you

[2nd Verse]
I wake up in the mornin'
1st ting I do
Check my messages
all from you
soo many things we're plannin' to do

[Chorus]

[Bridge]
I said i'll wait
& thats just what i'll do
'till i can be
together with you

[Chorus]
You
Just You


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on Oct. 11 2011 at 7:23 pm
BrokenThorn BRONZE, Blenheim, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"You've lived your life Like a candle in the wind. Not knowing who to cling to when the rain set in"
- Sir Elton John

Congrats on making the 2nd and 3rd most top voted song for today! I love this song, its simple but really describes emotion everyone has felt before! Comment on my first song posted here? x

JasonG. said...
on Apr. 18 2011 at 11:40 am
JasonG., Otto, Wyoming
0 articles 1 photo 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
why work against the system when its easier to work with the system. -unknown

It's so real about love, it made me stop and really think. Keep up the good work :)

on Nov. 15 2010 at 8:38 pm
Brittaner DIAMOND, Edenton, North Carolina
51 articles 0 photos 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
"words are just songs without the corny elevator music behind them"
-Me (random thought)

Awww don't cry they're just words.

Thanks for the feed back.


on Nov. 15 2010 at 2:01 pm
Halabella BRONZE, Longview, Texas
4 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
\\\"Quote the raven nevermore . . .\\\"

That is so sweet I cried while listening to it.

on Jun. 15 2010 at 9:56 pm
Brittaner DIAMOND, Edenton, North Carolina
51 articles 0 photos 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
"words are just songs without the corny elevator music behind them"
-Me (random thought)

Thanks, I actually thanked them for breaking up with me a few days ago because if it wasn't for him hurting me I would have never met the awesome person I have now! Added bonus they love it when I write them songs and they're helping me with some music. Thanks for the feed back!!!1

on Jun. 14 2010 at 5:01 pm
IAmMyself BRONZE, Newton, Massachusetts
1 article 1 photo 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
Saying that life will be good to you because your a good person is like saying that an angry bull won't charge because your a vegetarian










-I Don't Know

aaaaaaawwwwwww if someone wrote that for me i would think it was sweet. he's stupid

on Sep. 25 2009 at 1:25 pm
Brittaner DIAMOND, Edenton, North Carolina
51 articles 0 photos 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
"words are just songs without the corny elevator music behind them"
-Me (random thought)

Glad to know I could put a voice some one elses feelings.

on Sep. 25 2009 at 1:25 pm
Brittaner DIAMOND, Edenton, North Carolina
51 articles 0 photos 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
"words are just songs without the corny elevator music behind them"
-Me (random thought)

Thank you. I just write what I think I don't filter it & think of what sounds right & I also don't write until the words I guess you could say come to me. I guess you could call it natural or "not thinking about it"

on Sep. 22 2009 at 1:56 pm
Kortny_Mae GOLD, Davenport, Iowa
10 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm not short!...I'm fun sized!!!!!"

no problem...ya i agree...

jtrina said...
on Sep. 21 2009 at 7:07 pm
exactly how i feel!

on Sep. 21 2009 at 4:33 pm
Brittaner DIAMOND, Edenton, North Carolina
51 articles 0 photos 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
"words are just songs without the corny elevator music behind them"
-Me (random thought)

thakers. I'm working on music for it on Jam Studio until I learn guitar, or piano better I've pretty much got the drum part for it down since I know how to play them some. I'm totally clueless on the rest. I'd like to hear the music you put to it. It might help and give me some ideas of what to do with it.

on Sep. 21 2009 at 3:58 pm
Keigs2010 BRONZE, Capebreton, Other
4 articles 0 photos 2 comments
i seriously just sang this hole song out in my head with music and everything AMAZING song keep it up1:)

on Sep. 19 2009 at 6:57 pm
lovelife365 BRONZE, Silver Spring, Maryland
3 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
You live, you learn.

Great job! You're writing style is awesome.

on Sep. 19 2009 at 12:22 pm
Brittaner DIAMOND, Edenton, North Carolina
51 articles 0 photos 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
"words are just songs without the corny elevator music behind them"
-Me (random thought)

Thank you. This was just something for my (now Ex) boyfriend that the ideas just popped into my head.

THank you, Your feedback is appreciate3d

on Sep. 19 2009 at 12:21 pm
Brittaner DIAMOND, Edenton, North Carolina
51 articles 0 photos 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
"words are just songs without the corny elevator music behind them"
-Me (random thought)

Thank you. It was for my(now ex) boyfiend. I don't think i'll stop writing anytime soon. Songs are just words that haven't een sung yet, And I have alot to say.

Thank you, Your feed back it appreciated

on Sep. 19 2009 at 12:19 pm
Brittaner DIAMOND, Edenton, North Carolina
51 articles 0 photos 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
"words are just songs without the corny elevator music behind them"
-Me (random thought)

Thank you. I was just a song I wrote for my (now Ex) boyfirend. Apperently It scared him. I write my feelings and don't filter them, so this is what I got.

Thanks for your comment, It's appreciated.

on Sep. 18 2009 at 2:36 pm
keyboard_musican SILVER, Springfield, Illinois
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that was so sweet and deep. i could really connect.

on Sep. 18 2009 at 2:27 pm
Kortny_Mae GOLD, Davenport, Iowa
10 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm not short!...I'm fun sized!!!!!"

thats really good! keep writng

Judith BRONZE said...
on Sep. 18 2009 at 9:42 am
Judith BRONZE, Westmont, Illinois
2 articles 1 photo 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life is what happens to you while youre busy making other plans"

i absolutely love this, it reminds me of me and something I'm going through. this songs great.


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