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Guilty End

[1st Verse]
I feel soo guilty
'cuz I know what i did
I hurt myself again
just like i knew i would
but i still did

[Chorus]
I'm guilty
i'll pay the price
blood or tears
which would you like
becasue tonight
i've shed both
and as they mix around me
I see
that everyone is better off

[2nd Verse]
I know i'm guilty
you told me not to
and i did
and now i'm gone
and your still sad

[Chorus]

[Bridge]
I couldin't take it
I was weak
I surrendered to the pain
you should be ashaimed (X3)


[3rd Verse]
& i'm still guilty
I've already payed the price
my blood on my hands
and the tears in your eyes
maybe you shouldn't of loved me
becasue it just hurt you
in the end





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pineappler03 said...
Jul. 30, 2016 at 1:34 pm
It's so amazing! It makes me want to cry and just read it on a countinuos loop.
 
theallidiaries said...
Aug. 7, 2014 at 12:30 am
it's really truly a great song! and your chorus is on point so just as advice i would slip in in there one more time and add a couple lines afterwards to really make the effect even better. amazing song though =)
 
JasonG. said...
Apr. 18, 2011 at 11:46 am

it made me cry when i read it, keep up the good work. work like this makes people stop and really think

:) keep it up

 
XxTickleM3EmoxX This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 27, 2011 at 11:33 am
your great! im stunned! i like to sing but i cant really write songs... keep doing what you do! its amazingg!
 
Annika said...
Sept. 19, 2009 at 7:44 am
thats really sad
 
Bumble_Bee replied...
Sept. 19, 2009 at 12:17 pm
Yeah It was from a really depressing time when my parents were divorcing. I write happy and sad ones now. Considering my muses are Love & dispair.
tee-hee
thanks for your comment, it is appreciated.
 
iwantcoconow replied...
Sept. 23, 2009 at 10:36 pm
love and pain is my muse too
 
Humming_Bird replied...
Sept. 24, 2009 at 3:45 pm
Cool I just recently found that out by reading through and singing my songs. I have a wide range from sickly mushy that make me want to kick my self in the but and ones soo angry that I want to kick the other person lol
 
iwantcoconow replied...
Sept. 24, 2009 at 3:47 pm
thats cool
 
Humming_Bird replied...
Sept. 24, 2009 at 4:03 pm
Thank you!
 
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