3, 2, 1

September 1, 2009
[1st Verse]
3 days
3 nights
things don't feel right
but maybe thats just me
here i am runnin-my-mouth
trying to hide
how much i've missed
you pervy ways
the sunny days
just arent sunny enough
to warm me up like your sweet words

I feel like crying to sleep
I haven't talked to you for 3 nights
I only know 2 ways to
show you,
tell you
how I feel
but 1 way just feels so

[2nd Verse]
I miss you babe
Life isn't the same
I know it hasn't been that long
(& you've moved on)

But lookin' in the sky
just isn't as intertainin'
& takin' pictures
just ain't as fun
not without my sun

so 3, 2, 1(X5)

i'll tell you now
gotta' tell ya'
I miss you

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yungnserg916 said...
today at 3:20 pm
it touched my heart my relations to this are real
Jar_of_Jelly said...
today at 3:08 pm
i was singing this in while i was reading this and it felt so good
lullniyaa said...
today at 3:07 pm
i like how they didn't rhyme all the words
Carly T. said...
Sept. 22, 2009 at 3:53 pm
I really love this one. I completely understand the situation. Good job! :)
Humming_Bird replied...
Sept. 22, 2009 at 3:58 pm
Thanks Yeah bad part is they broke up with me now. It was "too mushy"
carly... replied...
Sept. 23, 2009 at 9:19 pm
aww. man. but just you wait. pretty soon there will be a guy, and you'll write one of the best poems you ever have, and he'll love it. i promise. :)
Humming_Bird replied...
Sept. 24, 2009 at 3:44 pm
I actually already think there is. I've had this crush on this guy forever & I'm 99.9% positive he likes me back. So there is a good possibility I will be writing alot more songs since my muses are love & dispair. lol
carly... replied...
Sept. 24, 2009 at 5:43 pm
see! i told ya. :) my poems are usually inspired when something bad happens 'cause that's when I need to vent the most. But I have a few that are very happy. :) do you know how long it takes for poems to get approved? mine are still pending.
Humming_Bird replied...
Sept. 24, 2009 at 5:58 pm
anywhere from 2 days to a month. there is no telling it depends on how many you have pending and how full the server is. sowwies & thanks i never really noticed him before but he has grown up alot & well I love his personality & his eyes are b-e-a-utiful. Oh golly gee guppis i think i'll write a song now.
it's funny how so many inspiring things to me. I bet if i sung this at lunch since they're in my lunch i'll have a bf by well lets see i'... (more »)
carly... replied...
Sept. 25, 2009 at 8:59 pm
Alright, thanks! I've been waiting for about a week now and I just wasn't sure.
Awwwwww. :) A lot of stuff inspires me, too. But then I get too lazy to write it out. I asked for a laptop for Christmas so that I can bring it and write/type whenever I feel it since I type way faster than I can write. haha
Humming_Bird replied...
Sept. 27, 2009 at 10:23 am
Yeah typing is easier for me too but, I have a notebook that I decorated that I write all my songs in so I keep that on me.
carly... replied...
Sept. 27, 2009 at 6:46 pm
Yeah, I tried that once. Then I lost it. So I bought another. And I lost that one. lol so I just use the notepad in my phone.
Humming_Bird replied...
Sept. 27, 2009 at 9:25 pm
Yeah I've done that as well thats why I attempt to remember it everyday. It dosn't work out good most of the time. The notepad on my phone is usefull I think I have hundreds of entries because it limits the character, so it takes like 4 to make a song. lolZ
carly... replied...
Sept. 30, 2009 at 3:41 pm
lol my notepad only uses like 140 characters, and i can only have 30 entires. then my friend introduced me to twitter, so when i have to delete one, i send it onto my twitter so that i can look at it later. twitter is actually quite convenient for me. :)
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