You and Me

September 6, 2009
By philliesfreak891 BRONZE, Red Lion, Pennsylvania
philliesfreak891 BRONZE, Red Lion, Pennsylvania
2 articles 3 photos 1 comment

Just sitting out here
In the middle of the night
Thinking to myself
It’s going to be alright

I see everyone staring
When they look at me
There is nothing to see
But you and me

I hear your voice everywhere I go
I see your face and then I know
It will always be
You and me

You have a portion of my heart
A commitment that we did start
The only thing you don’t see
Is why you’re not loving me

Now I’m sitting here alone
Looking at the stars
Your face lights up the sky
I feel like I can fly

When I see your face
And you look at me
I get stuck under your spell
I’m hypnotized as you can see


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Ghost47 said...
on Apr. 29 2016 at 1:27 pm
This is a really good poem and i can relate to this and you got talent.

Noctiluca GOLD said...
on Mar. 28 2015 at 4:33 am
Noctiluca GOLD, Hyderabad, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"While some seek to find themselves, I shall seek to create myself."

that's intense! love it!

on Oct. 15 2012 at 11:07 am
NotWriting_Bazinga PLATINUM, Park Rapids, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"She thought in Italics and felt in CAPITALS." Henry James, Jr
"The terrible part is the truth is the only thing you want to hear.... but the last thing you want to admit." Casey Dalton

It is like you capture unriquitted love perfectly... i am happy to say it made me cry :')

on Oct. 15 2012 at 11:07 am
NotWriting_Bazinga PLATINUM, Park Rapids, Minnesota
33 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
"She thought in Italics and felt in CAPITALS." Henry James, Jr
"The terrible part is the truth is the only thing you want to hear.... but the last thing you want to admit." Casey Dalton

It is like you capture unriquitted love perfectly... i am happy to say it made me cry :')

dchapman said...
on Oct. 7 2011 at 9:46 am
dchapman, Philladelphia, Pennsylvania
0 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
a kiss not tasted is a kiss wasted

thats exactly wat iam going through

on Nov. 11 2010 at 9:04 am
DannieBoo BRONZE, Cleveland, Ohio
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I would have to agree with you, it does sound more like a poem

on Jul. 2 2010 at 8:57 pm
autumntate2015 SILVER, Albertville, Alabama
9 articles 20 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Success is a journey, not a destination." -Ben Sweetland

this sounds like a poem rather than a song. but it is very well written. the wording is beautiful(: some of my work should be posted soon, go check it out please!

Key14 GOLD said...
on Apr. 27 2010 at 2:15 pm
Key14 GOLD, Douglasville, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
If Love is a Lie then is Hate the Truth



-Crosskey

I LOVE IT its an amzing poem and ive felt like that before it was amazing but hard to deal with at the same time

on Apr. 27 2010 at 6:49 am
Bella913 SILVER, New City, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Death is easy, living is harder."

this was awesome!!!! i really like the lines and i can create a tune to go along with it in my mind.

on Mar. 14 2010 at 3:06 am
baumshell DIAMOND, Burbank, California
68 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I was thinking how nothing lasts and what a shame that is."-Benjamin Button

"The only thing you don’t see

Is why you’re not loving me" this is probably my favorite line! i lovee thisss! excellent job!

on Feb. 21 2010 at 12:34 pm
philliesfreak891 BRONZE, Red Lion, Pennsylvania
2 articles 3 photos 1 comment
Yes it has a tune.

on Feb. 20 2010 at 3:28 pm
MercyChristine GOLD, Oak Grove, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
oh shnykeis!

wow, I like it, does it have a tune?

Mandilee GOLD said...
on Dec. 8 2009 at 9:23 pm
Mandilee GOLD, Sierra Madre, California
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Great poem. I like it. :)

thatgirl_93 said...
on Nov. 24 2009 at 9:46 am
This song is great. It gives amazing images to vidualize

:) :) :)


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