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You and Me

Just sitting out here
In the middle of the night
Thinking to myself
It’s going to be alright

I see everyone staring
When they look at me
There is nothing to see
But you and me

I hear your voice everywhere I go
I see your face and then I know
It will always be
You and me

You have a portion of my heart
A commitment that we did start
The only thing you don’t see
Is why you’re not loving me

Now I’m sitting here alone
Looking at the stars
Your face lights up the sky
I feel like I can fly

When I see your face
And you look at me
I get stuck under your spell
I’m hypnotized as you can see



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NotWriting_Bazinga This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 15, 2012 at 11:07 am:
It is like you capture unriquitted love perfectly... i am happy to say it made me cry :')
 
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NotWriting_Bazinga This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 15, 2012 at 11:07 am:
It is like you capture unriquitted love perfectly... i am happy to say it made me cry :')
 
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dchapman said...
Oct. 7, 2011 at 9:46 am:
thats exactly wat iam going through
 
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DannieBoo said...
Nov. 11, 2010 at 9:04 am:
I would have to agree with you, it does sound more like a poem
 
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autumntate2015 said...
Jul. 2, 2010 at 8:57 pm:
this sounds like a poem rather than a song. but it is very well written. the wording is beautiful(: some of my work should be posted soon, go check it out please!
 
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CrossKey said...
Apr. 27, 2010 at 2:15 pm:
I LOVE IT its an amzing poem and ive felt like that before it was amazing but hard to deal with at the same time
 
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Bella913 said...
Apr. 27, 2010 at 6:49 am:
this was awesome!!!! i really like the lines and i can create a tune to go along with it in my mind.
 
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buxbaum said...
Mar. 14, 2010 at 3:06 am:
"The only thing you don’t see
Is why you’re not loving me" this is probably my favorite line! i lovee thisss! excellent job!
 
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RiverAnn said...
Feb. 20, 2010 at 3:28 pm:
wow, I like it, does it have a tune?
 
philliesfreak891 replied...
Feb. 21, 2010 at 12:34 pm :
Yes it has a tune.
 
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Amanda N. said...
Dec. 8, 2009 at 9:23 pm:
Great poem. I like it. :)
 
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thatgirl_93 said...
Nov. 24, 2009 at 9:46 am:
This song is great. It gives amazing images to vidualize
:) :) :)
 
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