Believing Is Deserving This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

September 2, 2009
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Everyone deserves someone,
just like the earth deserves the sun,
brings light into your life,
there's nothing like a lie …

To make you lose
but you know you're gonna
because everyone deserves someone.

Everyone deserves someone,
everyone deserves that
at prom when he asks you to
every moment is there,
all you have to do is
take a glance.

I've given up before,
stupid love songs,
thrown it out the door,
until I was shown something more …

A girl at the back of the
a boy who could never make love
in the hall they
they both took a second

Everyone deserves someone,
everyone deserves a
reassuring it's
worthwhile …

Even if he failed at love
even if she's searching for something
as he helps her pick her books up off the
in their eyes,
you realize,
love is the water,
that just has to make it to the

You can say you couldn't
care less,
you can say love is
but then tell me if believing in
is completely
pointless …

Tell me,
after all this
how a rainbow,
still comes after
rain and shine.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.

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Angel04 said...
today at 11:21 am
This song is really amazing! I was really blown away! :)
lullniyaa said...
Jan. 16 at 3:13 pm
i love how she express how she felt its was like a touching to my heart
JaronBachman10 said...
Oct. 26, 2016 at 9:47 am
#Cringeworthy still better than anything I could do.
madhurangelic24 said...
Mar. 11, 2015 at 12:11 pm
Indeed a touching piece it is!
EBurn said...
Apr. 17, 2014 at 12:43 am
You just described me hopefully this "song" also has a happy ending.
softcitty replied...
Mar. 16, 2015 at 12:39 pm
yes they do (:
luvmeforme said...
Nov. 21, 2013 at 3:35 pm
I like it and your right every one deserves everyone but do they really?
Josie V. replied...
Feb. 19, 2014 at 5:58 pm
Yes everyone does. They deserve to be loved. 
Samoa685 said...
Oct. 27, 2013 at 10:14 pm
Girlwiththesound said...
Oct. 20, 2013 at 8:25 pm
I just read this and I can hear music creeping up in my head if u need to write the accopinant just go with the flow and sing it will come( that is if you don't already have the song completely done)
Colichimarde said...
Sept. 15, 2012 at 10:09 pm
I love this poem, i've often  been one of the guys who just couldn't seem to make it last. I'm glad that you wrote this, it really does give one hope when looking ahead . . . Keep writing.
irishlass317 said...
Aug. 24, 2012 at 10:27 pm
I love this so much. When it becomes number 1 on the charts,I will listen to it ALL the time!!!!
aboutME said...
Aug. 2, 2012 at 3:54 pm
i almost cried at the end because of how much i can relate, its supprising how much the soul has to say.
iCheeto This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 3, 2012 at 12:32 pm
I am so in love with these lyrics.  It's an incredible song, and a heart warming, eye opening story.  Please read some of my work and comment on them, I'd be honored to know what you have to say about my own writing.  This is wonderful, I wish I could hear it to music <3 :D
Vackoe said...
Apr. 18, 2012 at 11:21 am
Amazing! I enjoyed every part of it (: you can picture the writing in your head as your reading it, well done! (:
Mimi15 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 14, 2012 at 3:11 pm
Wow! This is really great. Sorry for the advertising, but do you mind checking out some of my newer work? Keep writing :)
mylifestarringme said...
Mar. 1, 2012 at 1:15 pm
Thats So deep and powerful! I love iet so much!
CrazyNerdyFangirl said...
Jan. 17, 2012 at 7:31 pm
Wonderful message. :D
Nessa13 said...
Jan. 13, 2012 at 8:51 am
Oh my gosh! This was powerful! It's like I could feel the emotion! This was an amazing piece! I loved it.
aurorairis said...
Dec. 26, 2011 at 8:58 am
Wonderful! So deep and powerful! I love it!! Your message is so beautiful and portrayed so well! Please check out some of my work! Thanks!
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