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Empty

Why do I feel so alone
With everyone surrounding me
The silence over the phone
Constitutes the emptiness inside of me.

The fire inside has burned out
And the end is coming near
Tonight you’ll fulfill my doubt
That you won’t be staying here

Tell me you love me again
Just one more time before you go
Tell our story, how it began
“Once upon a time, not so long ago...”

You think I’m stupid but I know
Every little game you’ve played
‘Cause through your eyes it can show
How your love for me has fade

But it’s okay, it’s okay
I’ll move on one day
You’ll be dues I had to pay
To live life this way.




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thenightmaresource said...
May 3, 2013 at 9:34 am:
The LIne "You'll be dues I had to pay" reminds me of my own short story series. There are 2 parts still being approved as of 5/2/2013, but if you want to, check it out. A great song like this would go very well with the series.
 
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Ann17 said...
Sept. 29, 2011 at 12:30 pm:
I love it!!
 
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inspir3d This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 11, 2010 at 7:31 pm:
Hey nice song :) i really like it.
u might want to check out Lie to Me by David Cook, it kind of reminds me of this :)
but great job!!!
 
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keilly said...
Mar. 9, 2010 at 7:14 am:
i agree it is very deep. it has a lot of meaning and feelings. i loved it
 
indiecaligurl replied...
Mar. 9, 2010 at 6:26 pm :
Thank you! I wrote this when I was going through a rough time so it's supposed to convey those feelings I had. Thanks so much for taking time to read my work and comment :)
 
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Saphira96 said...
Mar. 6, 2010 at 5:05 pm:
Wow that was really emotional and deep! The message is really good and it made me feel how you intended! You are a great writer and i really do believe that you will become a famous writer!
 
indiecaligurl replied...
Mar. 9, 2010 at 6:25 pm :
Awww you're the sweetest! Thanks so much!!!!! I hope so :)
 
Saphira96 replied...
Mar. 10, 2010 at 6:43 pm :
Thanks and your very welcome! I just love reading good emotional work, and i believe you can do that perfectly!
 
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Bobo B. said...
Oct. 27, 2009 at 12:14 am:
it goes skin deep and even further if you know what i mean. fuhreal im inside my skin right about now
 
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Alex. said...
Sept. 18, 2009 at 12:51 pm:
I really like this piece. It's quite emotional and metaphorical and all that without being too over the top :)
 
indiecaligurl replied...
Sept. 21, 2009 at 3:27 am :
Thank you!
 
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