Loss Of Her

September 7, 2009
The scene fades
She's been betrayed
Now she's left standing all alone

Tears soak her face
She's lost her place
I't really too bad she can't go home

What is she to do?
It seems there's no one to trust
Not us
The world is cold and lonely
Without you
And she feels so empty
Without you

Life is over
No four-leaf clover
To save her from falling apart

Her home is nowhere
Lost without her
And now no one can stop her from falling apart


Life is over
Life is over

Without her best friend there to save her

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ScreamoRap said...
Oct. 5, 2013 at 1:39 am
This is good. Mine are different, but about loss, none the less. If you care to take a look, here.  TeenInk.com/mystuff.php?act=mywork
mutekid016 said...
Dec. 9, 2009 at 8:14 am
wow this is like my life! It doesnt just relate to best friends. It's everything youve ever loved and lost. Great Work!!!
JessieLouise2012 said...
Sept. 16, 2009 at 11:30 am
Oh my lanta! I like totally loved that...it means so much, to me, because I don't know how the fight started with my EX-best friend, and now were just that EX-best friends so yeah, I really liked this an it meant a lot to me.
P.S. I was wondering if I give you credit can I use it in my fanfiction.net story and that line about the four leaf clover was not lame, it went perfectly in there. :)
.xCutMyLifeIntoPiecesx. replied...
Sept. 19, 2009 at 3:04 pm
Yeah, that would be fantastic! I would love for you to use this in any way you can if you give me credit, that is a huge compliment, thanks so much!!! :D
Caroline G. said...
Sept. 16, 2009 at 1:34 am
Oh my gosh... this made me cry. This is so much what I am going through right now. Thanks :)
.xCutMyLifeIntoPiecesx. replied...
Sept. 19, 2009 at 3:04 pm
aw, well I really hope things get better! :)
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