Bleed [A Song]

July 7, 2009
By KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
65 articles 14 photos 30 comments

Just Let Go.

Did you see me?
Did you see me cry?
Will you watch me?
Will you watch me die?

LET GO.

Did you love me?
Or was it a lie?
Did you need me?
Or was I just a good time?

Well Now.
We’ll find out.
I stand here.
Split Open.
Tears Streaming.
Blood Flowing.



BLEED.
BLEED.
JUST BLEED.
ILL BLEED.
COME ON COME ON,
DO YOU LOVE ME?

As I,
BLEED.
Will you just watch
ME?
Will you walk
AWAY.
Or will you stop the
FLOW?
Darlin’ will you
STAY?

AS I BLEED.




Blood.
Crimson red.
Color of roses.
Color of death.

Hold me or let me go?
No more games,
Ive got to
KNOW.

Come on Come on.
You gonna stop the flow?
Come on Come on.
Let me know.
Don’t have much time.
Tell me please,
Before I die.

Wont you hold me close?

As I
BLEED.
I cant
BREATHE.
As I
BLEED.
So,
PLEASE.
As I,
BLEED.

Don’t Leave Me In The Dark…
LET GO.


The author's comments:
Once Again, this is a song...so it may be written to indicate how some parts wound be sung...such as the word in all caps , they would be screamed rather than sang.

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on Apr. 15 2010 at 10:27 am
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
65 articles 14 photos 30 comments
I would just like to say, because of your comment, Watch Me Bleed by Scary Kids Scaring Kids is now one of my favorite songs. However it is alot slower than this one, and I must admit much more beautiful.

on Apr. 15 2010 at 10:25 am
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
65 articles 14 photos 30 comments
probably never. sorry.lol

on Apr. 15 2010 at 10:23 am
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
65 articles 14 photos 30 comments
Uhm well It already has a tune...I just don't know how to write music so...

on Apr. 15 2010 at 10:22 am
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
65 articles 14 photos 30 comments
Was there a point to any of that?

on Apr. 15 2010 at 10:22 am
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
65 articles 14 photos 30 comments
It does already have a tune...

on Apr. 13 2010 at 7:45 pm
WonderDreamer23 BRONZE, Maplewood, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
Shut Up and Live I am the most sexiest thing that happened to you and i know you know it.

i love it it's abosutly great check it out! WOW can i give it some music make it real big?

on Apr. 13 2010 at 7:21 pm
criminalninja<33 SILVER, Hidalgo, Texas
9 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"things are only as beautiful as u percieve them"

bambambam

what's that?

excellency :)


yorf said...
on Apr. 13 2010 at 3:28 pm
actually. don't BLEEEEEEED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! yourself.

yorf said...
on Apr. 13 2010 at 3:22 pm
BLEEEEEDDDDD!!!!!!!! yourself

yorf said...
on Apr. 13 2010 at 3:10 pm
BLEEEEEED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yalith BRONZE said...
on Apr. 13 2010 at 8:39 am
Yalith BRONZE, Ottumwa, Iowa
2 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love is a lie; I trust hate."

"The pain of having a broken heart is not so much as to kill you, yet not so little as to let you live."

"You don’t realize how much you care about someone until they don’t care about you."

i love this song. i was wondering if i could print it out and give it a tune.

on Apr. 10 2010 at 10:46 pm
emo_nerd951 BRONZE, Clover, South Carolina
3 articles 5 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Always be kind, for everyone is fighting a hard battle." -unknown

This is really good!!! Like no joke. I am like dead serious. Keep up the good work!!!

on Mar. 28 2010 at 11:01 am
curlikap18 BRONZE, Newark, Delaware
2 articles 0 photos 14 comments
really love it! I want to hear it. so when its on youtube....

on Mar. 27 2010 at 9:43 am
Alexandria6 BRONZE, Hickory, North Carolina
4 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"This world will never be, what I expected. And if something went wrong, who would have guessed it?"

This is the best song i've ever read on here. I absolutely love it! And the best part is being able to relate to it.

on Mar. 22 2010 at 1:13 pm
VampChick49 BRONZE, Tomball, Texas
1 article 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
A day without laughter iz a day wasted!!!!

OMG thiz wuz one of the most emoest lovelyest things i have ever read i am so verry inspired i luv it

TNT25 SILVER said...
on Feb. 28 2010 at 11:47 am
TNT25 SILVER, Johnstown, Ohio
9 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Pain is just weakness leaving the body"

Very well written. The emotion is well displayed and dang its just a good song.

laaeira BRONZE said...
on Feb. 26 2010 at 7:34 pm
laaeira BRONZE, Kilgore, Texas
2 articles 0 photos 18 comments
I felt the song so well it was wonderful good job :)

Meli138 said...
on Feb. 6 2010 at 11:09 pm
Meli138, GP, Texas
0 articles 0 photos 56 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Like a bird with broken wings its not how high he flies but the song he sings"
"Everybody live like its the last day you will ever see tell me tell me do you feel the pressure now?"

Hey this was really good! It kinda reminded me (just a bit) of the song Watch Me Bleed by Scary Kids Scaring Kids and Give Me A Sign by Breaking Benjamin. Good Job! :D Youve got talent!

on Feb. 6 2010 at 11:14 am
DallysGrrl PLATINUM, Middlesex, New Jersey
20 articles 0 photos 199 comments
WOW. I really could feel the, well, feeling in this song. I don't know what those other people were talking about, because the passion and the raw truth here is inspiring and really great. I really did like it. It's #1 hit material!

on Jan. 18 2010 at 12:14 pm
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
65 articles 14 photos 30 comments
Thank you so much. Much better comment then the two people before you! =]


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