Bleed [A Song]

July 7, 2009
By KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
65 articles 14 photos 30 comments

Just Let Go.

Did you see me?
Did you see me cry?
Will you watch me?
Will you watch me die?

LET GO.

Did you love me?
Or was it a lie?
Did you need me?
Or was I just a good time?

Well Now.
We’ll find out.
I stand here.
Split Open.
Tears Streaming.
Blood Flowing.



BLEED.
BLEED.
JUST BLEED.
ILL BLEED.
COME ON COME ON,
DO YOU LOVE ME?

As I,
BLEED.
Will you just watch
ME?
Will you walk
AWAY.
Or will you stop the
FLOW?
Darlin’ will you
STAY?

AS I BLEED.




Blood.
Crimson red.
Color of roses.
Color of death.

Hold me or let me go?
No more games,
Ive got to
KNOW.

Come on Come on.
You gonna stop the flow?
Come on Come on.
Let me know.
Don’t have much time.
Tell me please,
Before I die.

Wont you hold me close?

As I
BLEED.
I cant
BREATHE.
As I
BLEED.
So,
PLEASE.
As I,
BLEED.

Don’t Leave Me In The Dark…
LET GO.


The author's comments:
Once Again, this is a song...so it may be written to indicate how some parts wound be sung...such as the word in all caps , they would be screamed rather than sang.

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on Apr. 15 2011 at 1:29 pm
hello-im-a-koala, Bronx, New York
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Favorite Quote:
People moving all the time inside a perfectly straight line. Don't you wanna curve away? When it's such, it's such a perfect day.

I've gotta say it's very Coldplay and that's good because, like them, you really found an artistic way to express feelings we all have. I love it :)

 


on Apr. 14 2011 at 9:16 am
TheAurorasFall PLATINUM, Dover, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
life isn't about the number of moments you take to breathe, but about the number of moments that take your breathe away.

hehe im singing this ish in my head

on Apr. 7 2011 at 8:36 pm
Pivotbandet BRONZE, Lakewood, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"People can change, But they can also change back."

"Blood.
Crimson red.
Color of roses.
Color of death." - I love this part!

on Apr. 4 2011 at 2:48 pm
rockstardream GOLD, I&#39m Not Saying, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"If you dream it you can do it." ~Walt Disney

I like the beginning lyrics- they fit together perfectly!

emodog15 said...
on Mar. 31 2011 at 9:19 am
emodog15, Hanover, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
too many to state

this is pritty cool, good work dude, this for some reason reminds me of last resort by papa roach and blood on my hands by the used, cool lyrics dude

on Mar. 15 2011 at 6:29 pm
secrets_of_silence GOLD, Gisborne, Other
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Favorite Quote:
life had i loved the more
had it but passed away
as quietly as the day
ebbs from the darkening star.


-emanuel litvinoff

<3<3<3<3

on Mar. 10 2011 at 4:07 pm
ashleyn PLATINUM, Zeeland, Michigan
39 articles 2 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't take life to seriously, nobody makes it out alive anyways"-Unknown

Love it!!!!!!! Seriously one of my favorites...i would love to hear the music for it ...is it on youtube or something?

on Mar. 9 2011 at 9:17 pm
thinkofsomethingbetter GOLD, Tallmadge, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
in short, being vegen just makes you better then everyone else.
- scott pilgrim vs the world. best movie ever!

denied like how?????

desiree said...
on Mar. 9 2011 at 8:02 pm
i loved it likewow i want to put my poems but i was denied

on Feb. 28 2011 at 9:25 am
Surrender SILVER, Largo, Florida
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honestly i think this song has more of a meaning and a purpose, alot of expressed words and meaning has been justified in your amazing lyrics! AWESOME WORK!

big .j. #50 said...
on Feb. 9 2011 at 9:49 am
i like!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

on Jan. 24 2011 at 7:17 pm
M.K.Jasper SILVER, Santa Ana, California
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Favorite Quote:
"The amateur believes he must first overcome his fear; then he can do his work. The professional knows that fear can never be overcome. He knows there is no such thing as a fearless warrior or a dread-free artist.”- Steven Pressfield

awesome lyrics! this is my kind of music :)

on Jan. 24 2011 at 1:55 pm
NeverSayShhh SILVER, Two Rivers, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
\"i dont think your beautiful, i think your beyond it\" [lil wayne]

hey!(: is this kinda like a SCREAMO song? lol it was great..xD when i first read it i didnt really get it but then i read the authors note and i understood it right away.. good job. really(:

on Jan. 18 2011 at 12:32 pm
Sammie_Shamrock PLATINUM, Holland, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Just bury me in the memories" -Modern day escape

I agree! you should deffinately gets so tunes in with the lyrics! Id download it to my mp3...good lyrics dude pretty rad!

on Dec. 10 2010 at 3:25 pm
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
65 articles 14 photos 30 comments
I understand that, as it is MY song. I was just wondering what the point to all these comments sating BLEEEDDDD were. I mean I don't care that they don't like it...I would just hope for more constructive critisism.

on Dec. 8 2010 at 11:05 am
there dont got to be a point sumone can write a song if tjey dont have a point it is kalled EXPRESSING YOURSELF!!!!!!!!

on Dec. 8 2010 at 11:02 am
this song is really good i actually cried cuz im goin thru something just like dis...me and ma bf dat i had for a long time just broke up a week ago and i miss him like crazii i dont know wat to do wit out him in my life!!!!

on Dec. 8 2010 at 10:25 am
Bradley_F. SILVER, Memphis, Tennessee
8 articles 0 photos 5 comments
i luved this song. i wish it were real so i cud put it into my mp3

nightgirl13 said...
on Nov. 19 2010 at 4:04 pm
nightgirl13, Beechgrove, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
shoot for the moon if you miss stay in the stars

that was a great song my kind of song

on Nov. 19 2010 at 12:00 pm
stephie95 PLATINUM, Tripoli, Other
25 articles 1 photo 65 comments
amazing song!!! really great!!!




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