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Bleed [A Song]

Just Let Go.

Did you see me?
Did you see me cry?
Will you watch me?
Will you watch me die?

LET GO.

Did you love me?
Or was it a lie?
Did you need me?
Or was I just a good time?

Well Now.
We’ll find out.
I stand here.
Split Open.
Tears Streaming.
Blood Flowing.



BLEED.
BLEED.
JUST BLEED.
ILL BLEED.
COME ON COME ON,
DO YOU LOVE ME?

As I,
BLEED.
Will you just watch
ME?
Will you walk
AWAY.
Or will you stop the
FLOW?
Darlin’ will you
STAY?

AS I BLEED.




Blood.
Crimson red.
Color of roses.
Color of death.

Hold me or let me go?
No more games,
Ive got to
KNOW.

Come on Come on.
You gonna stop the flow?
Come on Come on.
Let me know.
Don’t have much time.
Tell me please,
Before I die.

Wont you hold me close?

As I
BLEED.
I cant
BREATHE.
As I
BLEED.
So,
PLEASE.
As I,
BLEED.

Don’t Leave Me In The Dark…
LET GO.



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Bradley_F. said...
Dec. 8, 2010 at 10:25 am:
i luved this song. i wish it were real so i cud put it into my mp3
 
poetic_tragedy replied...
Jan. 18, 2011 at 12:32 pm :
I agree! you should deffinately gets so tunes in with the lyrics! Id download it to my mp3...good lyrics dude pretty rad!
 
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nightgirl13 said...
Nov. 19, 2010 at 4:04 pm:
that was a great song my kind of song
 
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steph95 said...
Nov. 19, 2010 at 12:00 pm:
amazing song!!! really great!!!
 
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DragonMaster66.6 said...
Nov. 19, 2010 at 11:08 am:
This song actually depressed me. I'm sorry you got hurt, if you did in fact get hurt. If you didn't get hurt or anything then you shouldn't be writing about something like this. But thats just my own opinion
 
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lajane22 said...
Oct. 6, 2010 at 11:49 am:
omg this is sooo good. id love to sing this!!! it would sound amazing if it was sung
 
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loversinjapan This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 2, 2010 at 9:11 pm:
This is REALLY good. I want this song playing on the radio right now cause its awesome. I can see Coldplay singin it...sorry big fan, big fan...lol
 
DragonMaster66.6 replied...
Nov. 19, 2010 at 11:09 am :

Coldplay? Really?

This song is more like a Hawthorne Heights tune

 
Tsume replied...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 2:38 pm :
i dont get the both of you guys coldplay and hawthorne are they like heavy metal bands or something:)
 
Tsume replied...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 2:41 pm :
WHAT IS COLDPLAY AND HAWTHORNE I WANT TO KNW ARE THEY SOME KIND OF HEAVY METAL BAND
 
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MusicalImpressions said...
Jul. 7, 2010 at 7:22 am:
dude that should be on the radio playing right now!!! it reminded me of how one stupid guy can cut u up so much. thanks for writing this song. i really love it.
 
cutebunny_10 replied...
Sept. 14, 2010 at 12:40 pm :
I AGREE ! :)
 
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MyFairyTaleEnding said...
Jun. 16, 2010 at 2:13 pm:
This is absolutly amazing...it actually triggered old feelings I have felt. I wish I could write songs that well! Great job!:)
 
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BeautifullyBroken18 said...
Jun. 15, 2010 at 5:56 pm:
this is one of the deepest saddest songs i've read all day on here. I like it though. I can relate. And the lyrics are ... well i've never seen a better choice of words to be strung together before in my life. Beautiful.
 
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LoveKills said...
Jun. 10, 2010 at 4:49 pm:
im at a lost for words when i read this. its just a wow song. in a great way
 
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S.S.D.D. said...
Apr. 19, 2010 at 9:04 pm:
this is amazing never thought i would say this but i feel jelouse of your talent
 
Tsume replied...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 2:45 pm :
THATS TRUE I MEAN FOR A GIRL LIKE ME TOTALLY TRUE BUT I HAVE TO ADMIT IT WAS THE BEST
 
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RayRay23 said...
Apr. 13, 2010 at 7:45 pm:
i love it it's abosutly great check it out! WOW can i give it some music make it real big?
 
KassyElizabeth This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 15, 2010 at 10:23 am :
Uhm well It already has a tune...I just don't know how to write music so...
 
theravenslover66 replied...
May 5, 2010 at 8:23 am :

i love it!!

i can relate to it

 

=]

 
amicrazyorisitjusteveryoneelse replied...
Sept. 15, 2010 at 11:22 pm :
You totally need to write out the chord progression to this
 
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