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Bleed [A Song]

Just Let Go.

Did you see me?
Did you see me cry?
Will you watch me?
Will you watch me die?

LET GO.

Did you love me?
Or was it a lie?
Did you need me?
Or was I just a good time?

Well Now.
We’ll find out.
I stand here.
Split Open.
Tears Streaming.
Blood Flowing.



BLEED.
BLEED.
JUST BLEED.
ILL BLEED.
COME ON COME ON,
DO YOU LOVE ME?

As I,
BLEED.
Will you just watch
ME?
Will you walk
AWAY.
Or will you stop the
FLOW?
Darlin’ will you
STAY?

AS I BLEED.




Blood.
Crimson red.
Color of roses.
Color of death.

Hold me or let me go?
No more games,
Ive got to
KNOW.

Come on Come on.
You gonna stop the flow?
Come on Come on.
Let me know.
Don’t have much time.
Tell me please,
Before I die.

Wont you hold me close?

As I
BLEED.
I cant
BREATHE.
As I
BLEED.
So,
PLEASE.
As I,
BLEED.

Don’t Leave Me In The Dark…
LET GO.




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NigomayNamikazeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 28, 2012 at 10:05 am:
AHHHHHHHHHHHH! WOW! ALL I CAN SAY IS.. AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
 
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babysteps said...
Jan. 11, 2012 at 1:51 pm:
wow you'll go far!
 
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Schuyler said...
Jan. 11, 2012 at 12:53 pm:
I love your song am going to play this song on my guitar .
 
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KatieMcPieThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 11, 2012 at 9:42 am:
this is amazing i really like it. keep writing =)
 
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Lovelife13 said...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 4:08 pm:
i think i'll post this to youtube give u credit because this is outstanding 
 
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Alwayslonesome said...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 2:31 pm:
Wow these lyrics are Breath taking and to me its just sad but astonishing :)) keep writing
 
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smurfett said...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 9:21 am:

thats not weird at all

 

 
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impossibletolove said...
Oct. 15, 2011 at 12:57 pm:
holy. crap. O_O i loved it!!!
 
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musiccrazy said...
Oct. 15, 2011 at 12:57 pm:
A-w-e-s-o-m-e! I loved it wish it had music so i could sing it around my house with out sounding like an idit teehee.
 
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JLEIGH96This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 27, 2011 at 6:13 pm:
Very creative i love it!
 
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14hkri said...
Jun. 5, 2011 at 6:19 pm:
Wow. Really Really good!! No, Great!! I could heard it playing out in my head!!! That's better then all mine combined!!
 
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i am me said...
Jun. 3, 2011 at 11:23 am:
that was awesome i bleed it out linkin park
 
i am me replied...
Jun. 3, 2011 at 11:30 am :
dude dont be so rude he was speeking his mind
 
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CUPCAKE5 said...
May 31, 2011 at 12:23 pm:
 That was awesome i wish i woul've wrote that .That was intense
 
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becool said...
May 25, 2011 at 8:19 pm:
Dude, That was DEEP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
smurfett replied...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 9:22 am :
thats not weird to say no not at all
 
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SeeAndBelieve said...
May 21, 2011 at 11:15 am:
This song is amazing. Keep up the good work. You should become a professional songwriter :)
 
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WhiteClouds said...
May 14, 2011 at 11:46 am:
I wish you could sing it!
 
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KatieMichelle said...
May 10, 2011 at 7:56 pm:
Amazing. thewords speak for themselves and shows the emotion given. i love it :) good job!
 
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life-and-music99 said...
May 9, 2011 at 5:51 pm:
I reeaallyyy liked it. I found it a bit cheesy but other than that it was awesome! keep up the good work and never let your dreams fall! :)
 
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