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June 2, 2009
By Jami Huffman BRONZE, Hartford, Michigan
Jami Huffman BRONZE, Hartford, Michigan
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[Chorus]
I was suppose to forget you
After you said those faithful words
That without you my life would be normal
But now you’re all I can remember.

It all started one cold rainy morning
Not seeming any different from the rest
Went through my daily routine
And I left unseen with no one in the house but me.
From class to class up until lunch
Sitting among friends laughing along
Then a sparkle caught my eye. It was you
I couldn’t bring myself to look away
Until you noticed me

[Chorus]
I was suppose to forget you
After you said those faithful words
That without you my life would be normal
But now you’re all I can remember.

Our eyes locked but only for a moment
Your face imprinted in my mind
I forced myself to look away
With fear of what you might find
Another glance every now and again
But then I had to go
I saw you again, sooner than I thought
My mind is clouded, my thoughts unclear
What started off as nothing turned into so much more
Everything was perfect ‘til that day
The day you left me shattered and bruised

[Chorus]
I was suppose to forget you
After you said those faithful words
That without you my life would be normal
But now you’re all I can remember.

Standing in the woods on that dark cloudy day.
You said it would be better if you left.
I heard your heart break
I felt the tears that ran down your cheek
You told me to act like you never existed
But the sound of your name
Rips holes in my chest
I never expected to see you again
I know that I still love you with every ounce of my being
But you’re perfect and I’m anything but.
“I’m sorry” was the last words you said before you left.

[Chorus]
I was suppose to forget you
After you said those faithful words
That without you my life would be normal
But now you’re all I can remember.

My world came crashing down
My breathe was taken
I couldn’t say anything
Left alone on the forest floor
Never to be mended again

[Chorus]
I was suppose to forget you
After you said those faithful words
That without you my life would be normal
But now you’re all I can remember.


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on Apr. 24 at 7:34 am
Summer_R_Quinn PLATINUM, Sioux Falls, South Dakota
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Favorite Quote:
If you chase two rabbits, you will lose them both.
- Native American proverb

Do not go gentle into that good night but rage, rage against the dying of the light.
- Dylan Thomas

What is past is past -- it is the present and the future that concern us.
- Hiawatha, founder of the Iroquois Confederacy

This is great!

on Apr. 11 2017 at 8:59 pm
the.ultimate.weirdo SILVER, Lakewood, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
" Every now and then when the brushes you by you need to use your strength to keep you up and standing tall. so never let something so small take such a big toll on your day."

wow really gets me in my feelings. its amazing

michelle98 said...
on Sep. 2 2015 at 4:38 pm
you must tell me how the lyrics go it was so awesome you have got some excellent talent

on Dec. 31 2014 at 3:30 pm
michelle98 SILVER, Bellevue, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is like a box of chocolates; you never know what you're gonna get," Forest Gump

Oh my gosh! This is beautiful!

on Feb. 19 2012 at 6:02 pm
HinataHyuga SILVER, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
5 articles 0 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
To never give up is my nindo, my ninja way. I can't run before taking my first step. A place to return to is were someone always thinks of you. Naruto-kun. Miso ramen. Back off kushina tomato Minato is mine! Kingmortha is my BFFFFF on teenink!

How cute:)

on Dec. 6 2011 at 10:35 am
Tori_Lie-write SILVER, Albuquerque, New Mexico
8 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
Be yourself, no one will care if you fly off the top of the roof and make it to the unicorns.

^like^haha:)

on Dec. 6 2011 at 10:34 am
Tori_Lie-write SILVER, Albuquerque, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
Be yourself, no one will care if you fly off the top of the roof and make it to the unicorns.

evrything about that song IS TWILIGHT!!:)  Good job on it! lol

on Aug. 27 2011 at 9:55 pm
ThePeaceDaisy BRONZE, Albany, New York
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Favorite Quote:
“Laundry is the only thing that should be separated by color.” - Unknown
I will change this every week!

i forgot to say even though everyone's already saying this, it TOTALLY reminded me of Twilight. mostly the "Standing in the woods on that dark cloudy day" verse.

on Aug. 27 2011 at 9:52 pm
ThePeaceDaisy BRONZE, Albany, New York
4 articles 5 photos 224 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Laundry is the only thing that should be separated by color.” - Unknown
I will change this every week!

good job! if your looking for a title it could be "I was supposed to forget you" or "(You're) All I can remember"

on Aug. 5 2011 at 9:06 pm
Anonymous_Me DIAMOND, Marble Hill, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is but a walking shadow."






~Shakespeare (Macbeth)

awesome. but this is definately inspired by the Twilight series....

on Jul. 19 2011 at 2:31 pm
chrissie_star GOLD, Commerce, California
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Favorite Quote:
Its just another chapter in the past just turn the page dont close the book.

omg!! totally can relate to it!!

on Jul. 14 2011 at 4:42 pm
Tysondramafreak, Clearwater, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
Love is not about finding someone u can live with, but someone u cant live without.

"They say that the British wore red so the enemy wouldn't see them bleed when the enemy hit. Now I know why the Packers where yellow pants!!" :)

it seems like everyone thinks that except me...i thought of me seeing my ex-bf after we broke up....:/

on Jul. 14 2011 at 4:40 pm
Tysondramafreak, Clearwater, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
Love is not about finding someone u can live with, but someone u cant live without.

"They say that the British wore red so the enemy wouldn't see them bleed when the enemy hit. Now I know why the Packers where yellow pants!!" :)

I read this & it reminded me of somthing that happend 2 me....GREAT SONG!!!

on May. 9 2011 at 6:55 am
wasauskyx BRONZE, New Haven, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
I am not afraid to speak my mind. I am honest, but when I do speak my mind, I get ignored.
~me!

That's exactly what I was thinking of but it seems too much to be coincidential so it must be...

on Mar. 26 2011 at 8:41 pm
kaykaybeck PLATINUM, Petersburg, Michigan
24 articles 4 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life takes you somewhere, love helps you get there.

It left me speechless. So good I love it. (:

Sallytheseal said...
on Jan. 19 2011 at 1:22 pm
yeah it is sooooooooooo amazing I am like crying its so good

nightgirl13 said...
on Nov. 19 2010 at 4:19 pm
nightgirl13, Beechgrove, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
shoot for the moon if you miss stay in the stars

did u write it after newmoon

on Nov. 14 2010 at 2:20 pm
poetic_natural GOLD, Jefferson, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"you know you're in love because you can't fall asleep, because reality is finally better than your dreams"

this reminds me of the scene in new moon where edward leaves bella. she lays on the forest floor, its similair to this song

jennifur GOLD said...
on Sep. 9 2010 at 10:55 pm
jennifur GOLD, Youngstown, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"even after all this time the sun never says to the earth 'you owe me.' see what happens with a love like that? it lights up the sky." -hafiz

this really illuminates the understanding of starting and ending. very good(:

on Aug. 18 2010 at 6:04 pm
-BeautifulFeet- PLATINUM, Maysville, Missouri
21 articles 0 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Imagination is more important than knowledge. Knowledge is limited, imagination encircles the world."

This hit too close to home reminding me of my recent breakup. It is really good though. 


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