I Dismiss You

January 7, 2015
Thefanatasticagirlie101 SILVER, Euless, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"The best love is the kind that awakens the soul; that makes us reach for more, that plants the fire in our hearts and brings peace to our mind. That's what I hope to give you forever." ~The Notebook


Everyone says you’re smart, sexy, and beautiful                         All those redeeming qualities right under your cuticle.                 Even teachers look upon you as their shining night                   And your eyes bore holes that will comfort children’s fright.       Some people say that you are the “whole package”                 But I’m afraid of you becoming a hatcheck.                                                                                                                               My life would be complete,                                                         If we had never met (or meet).                                                 You turned my life around                                                         Now it’s all upside down.                                                         Not for the better, but for the worst                                           And to this day, you make it seem like our love wasn’t first.                                                                                                                                                                                                     I wish you weren’t on my mind                                                   Like a bee that buzzes near someone’s behind.                          Even though you aren’t as “head over heels” for me as I am for you                                                                                    Your appearance makes me wonder if that’s really who I called my “little boo.”                                                                       Maybe we weren’t meant to be                                             Since our love story was near the corner of batshit crazy.                                                                                                           I will alter my personality                                                           To that of someone who is rigid in their mentality.                   Someday, somehow, somewhere                                               I will find the man of my dreams, and he will be true and fair.       Now that you no longer my epic fail                                           It will be dismissed as some kind of unreal fairy tale.                             


The author's comments:

I thought of this as I was thinking about movies in where the boyfriends are total douchebags to the girls, and treat them like going out with them isn't worth it.


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on Oct. 25 2015 at 8:12 pm
Farhan Mohiuddin SILVER, Sugar Land,
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Wow, this is pretty sad and touches upon the basis of many people's lives. you have good talent keep at it.

on Jan. 15 2015 at 9:18 pm
ansem_unlimited PLATINUM, Frederick, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
Thou may think of me as desired, to idolize or villanize me whichever you may choose. but gaze upon me and thou sall not see the husk of a man! for all my sins and all my bliss, i am anything but hollow
-Ansem_Unlimited

That's the spirit!

on Jan. 15 2015 at 6:14 pm
Thefanatasticagirlie101 SILVER, Euless, Texas
6 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The best love is the kind that awakens the soul; that makes us reach for more, that plants the fire in our hearts and brings peace to our mind. That's what I hope to give you forever." ~The Notebook

Thanks, this just popped out of my head one day. And it rhymes, so I thought, "Hey what the heck, why not give it a shot."

on Jan. 15 2015 at 12:01 pm
ansem_unlimited PLATINUM, Frederick, Maryland
33 articles 0 photos 140 comments

Favorite Quote:
Thou may think of me as desired, to idolize or villanize me whichever you may choose. but gaze upon me and thou sall not see the husk of a man! for all my sins and all my bliss, i am anything but hollow
-Ansem_Unlimited

pretty sad, living in someone's shadow like that... this is a very conflicted work

on Jan. 13 2015 at 10:56 am
Thefanatasticagirlie101 SILVER, Euless, Texas
6 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The best love is the kind that awakens the soul; that makes us reach for more, that plants the fire in our hearts and brings peace to our mind. That's what I hope to give you forever." ~The Notebook

Thanks @Abi-street, you are a talented writer yourself. I love hearing feedback that could help improve my writng.

on Jan. 13 2015 at 4:19 am
Abi-street GOLD, Birmingham, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Try to be a rainbow in someone’s cloud. - Maya Angelou

I love the use of rhyme it engages the reader :) its catchy and nice :) keep it up :)




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