The Meaning of Love? MAG

November 8, 2008
By Kiana Baker GOLD, Alto, Texas
Kiana Baker GOLD, Alto, Texas
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The beating of my broken heart, now chained and locked away,
I hear much louder, through the night, than words we never say.
As hollow kisses turn to dust and fall against my skin,
I pray that I might find the strength to fall in love again.
Abandoned innocence, stripped away, discarded on the floor.
In the dirt, I bury hope that love leaves unlocked doors.
I am held, though never cherished, yet to be made whole.
My tears can wipe themselves away, but I must save my soul.
Bare feet, run, lead me home, where I am Mother’s child,
And toward the pale rose sunset for a pretty little while.
If broken wings may carry dreams, and carry me to sleep,
Take me far away from love and tell me what it means.


The author's comments:
Writing is my passion … I hope you enjoy my poem!

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on Feb. 2 2009 at 11:15 pm
this is so beautiful! wow i wish i could write like you :]] u are amazing <33

on Feb. 2 2009 at 10:29 pm
I congratulate you on your literary passion; the poem was sweet, real, and simple. I was impressed by your talent, especially at such a young age! I am in awe of the Teen Ink writers; they continue to surprise me with talent, beauty and understanding with so little effort!(Or so it seems.)







If love could be descibed,



it would be the stars radiating in your smile,



the way the sunlight dances in your eyes,



and the warmth of your hand when its holding mine.







Your love is like the ocean waves caressing the land,



like the flight of birds gliding in the air,



like young lovers against the purple sunset dancing in the sand,



your love is like the diamond, forever and rare.







A brief glimpse at my work reveals the long road I must travel even to equal your talent! Good Luck, Kiana!

Br3zziFlow3d said...
on Jan. 30 2009 at 5:58 pm
Wonderful,youthful, amd imaginative is what I get when I read your poem. Everyone wants to know what love really means.

melinda13 said...
on Jan. 30 2009 at 2:15 am
wow, that was BEAUTIFUL!

lt95 said...
on Jan. 29 2009 at 10:59 pm
This is truly deep. I wish I could write that well!:)

goofy gober said...
on Jan. 29 2009 at 10:19 pm
i love your work because i can understand it i have gone through the same thing.

lalax3 said...
on Jan. 29 2009 at 12:49 pm
this is so deep, i love it :)

babyknox said...
on Jan. 28 2009 at 6:07 pm
This was the sweetest and cutest poem i have ever read! Oh, i almost wanted 2 cry:((

*TheAuthor* said...
on Jan. 26 2009 at 4:59 am
Wow...I am completely humbled by all of your comments...thank you so much!















Kiana

on Jan. 24 2009 at 10:32 pm
This is beautiful. I absolutely loved it. The flow was phenomenal, your message was clear... I consider this to be true poetry: and not many people can write it.

tweedle dee said...
on Jan. 22 2009 at 8:27 pm
this flowed GREAT!!! tons of talent you are amazing!!! it rhymed and flowed perfectly and the emotion was captured so simply and beautifully! great job!!!

on Jan. 22 2009 at 6:27 pm
I really loved your poem it was awesome it really captivates the true love feelings that someone can have towards another person.

khammon016 said...
on Jan. 15 2009 at 3:42 pm
that poem is probably the best i've heard in a long time. great job. you're a natural

Mikala said...
on Jan. 15 2009 at 3:28 am
I like this poem its good..

lizzzy said...
on Jan. 14 2009 at 8:13 pm
tht was a good pome

izzy said...
on Jan. 14 2009 at 8:10 pm
this was a good pome

lizzy said...
on Jan. 14 2009 at 8:09 pm
good pome great job

cc12388 said...
on Jan. 13 2009 at 12:30 pm
i thought that poem was amazing! : D it is very well written and the rythme of it just kinda falls into place which is a really neat thing. i know that this poem is the best i have heard in a very long time. I hope to hear another poem from you soon. Keep up the good work!!

on Jan. 8 2009 at 2:26 pm
i love this poem. it's so true.

*TheAuthor* said...
on Jan. 6 2009 at 5:46 am
Wow.You're comments are so encouraging! Im only thirteen, and I'm pretty suprised that my writing has touched someone so deeply. My mom says they're good...but she's my mom! You've made me feel that my writing is valuable; Im totally inspired. Thank you so much!


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