The Meaning of Love? This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

November 8, 2008
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The beating of my broken heart, now chained and locked away,
I hear much louder, through the night, than words we never say.
As hollow kisses turn to dust and fall against my skin,
I pray that I might find the strength to fall in love again.
Abandoned innocence, stripped away, discarded on the floor.
In the dirt, I bury hope that love leaves unlocked doors.
I am held, though never cherished, yet to be made whole.
My tears can wipe themselves away, but I must save my soul.
Bare feet, run, lead me home, where I am Mother’s child,
And toward the pale rose sunset for a pretty little while.
If broken wings may carry dreams, and carry me to sleep,
Take me far away from love and tell me what it means.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.

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melinda13 said...
Jan. 30, 2009 at 2:15 am
wow, that was BEAUTIFUL!
lt95 said...
Jan. 29, 2009 at 10:59 pm
This is truly deep. I wish I could write that well!:)
goofy gober said...
Jan. 29, 2009 at 10:19 pm
i love your work because i can understand it i have gone through the same thing.
...daydream... said...
Feb. 10, 2009 at 10:45 pm
it's very touching and realistic. you have a real gift.
LaLa16 said...
Feb. 10, 2009 at 10:22 pm
Your poem was absolutely amazing,and very inspiring,I loved it with a passion!!!I write poems to kind of like this, but not nearly like you put it together...You have a great talent keep up the good work,I really loved your piece sooooo much!!!!^-^(keep writing youll take it somewhere)
lalax3 said...
Jan. 29, 2009 at 12:49 pm
this is so deep, i love it :)
babyknox said...
Jan. 28, 2009 at 6:07 pm
This was the sweetest and cutest poem i have ever read! Oh, i almost wanted 2 cry:((
*TheAuthor* said...
Jan. 26, 2009 at 4:59 am
Wow...I am completely humbled by all of your comments...thank you so much!

ezsmilesannemarie said...
Jan. 24, 2009 at 10:32 pm
This is beautiful. I absolutely loved it. The flow was phenomenal, your message was clear... I consider this to be true poetry: and not many people can write it.
tweedle dee said...
Jan. 22, 2009 at 8:27 pm
this flowed GREAT!!! tons of talent you are amazing!!! it rhymed and flowed perfectly and the emotion was captured so simply and beautifully! great job!!!
kittysuperstar said...
Jan. 22, 2009 at 6:27 pm
I really loved your poem it was awesome it really captivates the true love feelings that someone can have towards another person.
khammon016 said...
Jan. 15, 2009 at 3:42 pm
that poem is probably the best i've heard in a long time. great job. you're a natural
Mikala said...
Jan. 15, 2009 at 3:28 am
I like this poem its good..
lizzzy said...
Jan. 14, 2009 at 8:13 pm
tht was a good pome
izzy said...
Jan. 14, 2009 at 8:10 pm
this was a good pome
lizzy said...
Jan. 14, 2009 at 8:09 pm
good pome great job
cc12388 said...
Jan. 13, 2009 at 12:30 pm
i thought that poem was amazing! : D it is very well written and the rythme of it just kinda falls into place which is a really neat thing. i know that this poem is the best i have heard in a very long time. I hope to hear another poem from you soon. Keep up the good work!!
vampire_whore said...
Jan. 8, 2009 at 2:26 pm
i love this poem. it's so true.
*TheAuthor* said...
Jan. 6, 2009 at 5:46 am
Wow.You're comments are so encouraging! Im only thirteen, and I'm pretty suprised that my writing has touched someone so deeply. My mom says they're good...but she's my mom! You've made me feel that my writing is valuable; Im totally inspired. Thank you so much!
sierra W. said...
Feb. 25, 2009 at 4:49 pm
wow.. that was really touching and deep.yoou have beautiful ways of putting things, the things you write about reminds me of my own =). good job
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