The Meaning of Love? MAG

November 8, 2008
By Kiana Baker GOLD, Alto, Texas
Kiana Baker GOLD, Alto, Texas
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The beating of my broken heart, now chained and locked away,
I hear much louder, through the night, than words we never say.
As hollow kisses turn to dust and fall against my skin,
I pray that I might find the strength to fall in love again.
Abandoned innocence, stripped away, discarded on the floor.
In the dirt, I bury hope that love leaves unlocked doors.
I am held, though never cherished, yet to be made whole.
My tears can wipe themselves away, but I must save my soul.
Bare feet, run, lead me home, where I am Mother’s child,
And toward the pale rose sunset for a pretty little while.
If broken wings may carry dreams, and carry me to sleep,
Take me far away from love and tell me what it means.


The author's comments:
Writing is my passion … I hope you enjoy my poem!

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Anna Schanus said...
on Feb. 20 2015 at 1:31 am
Anna Schanus, Howard Lake, Minnesota
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this isnt a limerick?

on Jan. 1 2015 at 2:35 pm
OurVoices PLATINUM, Merrimac, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"It takes courage to grow up and turn out to be who you really are" - e.e. cummings

this is amazing work! great job! 5 stars!

on Dec. 30 2014 at 6:09 pm
Thefanatasticagirlie101 SILVER, Euless, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"The best love is the kind that awakens the soul; that makes us reach for more, that plants the fire in our hearts and brings peace to our mind. That's what I hope to give you forever." ~The Notebook

I'll check out your work if you check out mine. Deal or no deal.

on Dec. 30 2014 at 6:08 pm
Thefanatasticagirlie101 SILVER, Euless, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"The best love is the kind that awakens the soul; that makes us reach for more, that plants the fire in our hearts and brings peace to our mind. That's what I hope to give you forever." ~The Notebook

@Appul I totally agree with you. Someday, somehow, somewhere, she will become the next generation author that changed writing styles for teens in a whole different level. Keep up the great work Kiana.

on Oct. 22 2014 at 6:35 pm
dappled.sunlight SILVER, Toronto, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Plant a tree in your heart, and a songbird will come." -Chinese Proverb

Wow! I love the rhythm and imagery! :)

Orlivee BRONZE said...
on Oct. 8 2014 at 7:35 am
Orlivee BRONZE, Lagos, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Never make someone a priority if they will make you an option.

This poem totally captures it...awesome!!

Appul said...
on Jul. 22 2014 at 1:29 am
I loved your poem. You have the gift of writing. God bless !!

on May. 10 2014 at 2:04 am
Unspoken_Word SILVER, Bronx, New York
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Your poem was simply breath taking. Your choice words spoke louder and with much more clarity than anything I've read in a while. I will definitely be sharing this with my creative writing class, with due credit of course.

on May. 1 2014 at 7:40 pm
2-Is-Better-Than-1 BRONZE, Mayfield, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass, it's about learning to dance in the rain"

I really do love this poem a lot!

whynot? said...
on Apr. 28 2014 at 2:40 am
lovely poem dont know the feeling but i can picture it :)

on Dec. 3 2013 at 11:57 pm
Puzzle PLATINUM, Orem, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
When life gives you lemons,
Eat them.
They do not taste that bad.

Life is like autumn.
Stop to crunch the pesky leaves.

Love is... let me think...

Don't judge a book by its cover.

Poetry is a way to put words to things that are unexplainable.

Needed this. Now.. That is all.

on Nov. 16 2013 at 9:45 pm
GracieMay SILVER, Brownsville, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
Writing is a form of therapy; sometimes I wonder how all those who do not write, compose or paint can manage to escape the madness, melancholia, the panic and fear which is inherent in a human situation.
Graham Greene

I love your poem it descripes my feelings  

on Nov. 3 2013 at 8:43 pm
KaylaaLovee GOLD, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Imperfection is beauty. Madness is genius. And its better to be absolutely ridiculous than absolutely boring. And when it comes down to it, I let them think what they want. If they care enough to bother with what I do, I'm already better than them."

love this..my.feelings.exactly.

on Aug. 31 2013 at 2:17 pm
CrazySissi GOLD, Newman Lake, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
My only love sprung from my only hate. Too early seen unknown and known too late.

I love your poem.

on Jul. 31 2013 at 12:24 am
SoImAWriterNow BRONZE, Schenectady, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"But better to get hurt by the truth than comforted with a lie." -Khaled Hosseini

and

"Don't walk behind me; I may not lead. Don't walk in front of me; I may not follow. Just walk beside me and be my friend." Albert Camus

Best poem I've read about love. Speaks so many volumes.

sarah98 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 26 2013 at 4:07 pm
sarah98 BRONZE, Holyoke, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
It is better to write for yourself and have no audience than write for your audience and have no self.

This is probably the best thing i've read on here. five outta five stars. check out some of my work??

Secret-Voice said...
on Apr. 19 2013 at 7:42 pm
Secret-Voice, South Berwick, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is a song, Sing it!"

This is just AMAZING. I wish that i was this good at writing.

on Apr. 12 2013 at 2:31 pm
Bluetooth13 SILVER, A Town In, Texas
8 articles 0 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
To play a wrong note is insignificant, to play without passion is inexcusable.

~ Ludwig van Beethoven

hey im pretty new, please check out my work  

on Mar. 18 2013 at 3:41 pm
SouthernRose718 BRONZE, Apopka, Florida
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This is a fantastically written poem i like the figurative language and the imagery it very much reminds me of my new favorite tv show.

on Mar. 9 2013 at 2:34 pm
Dreamer21 PLATINUM, Hockessin, Delaware
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Favorite Quote:
To the world you might be one person, but to one person you might be the world.

Wow this is a really great poem. I really liked all of the imagery that you used in it :D




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