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The Meaning of Love? MAG

November 8, 2008
By Kiana Baker GOLD, Alto, Texas
Kiana Baker GOLD, Alto, Texas
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The beating of my broken heart, now chained and locked away,
I hear much louder, through the night, than words we never say.
As hollow kisses turn to dust and fall against my skin,
I pray that I might find the strength to fall in love again.
Abandoned innocence, stripped away, discarded on the floor.
In the dirt, I bury hope that love leaves unlocked doors.
I am held, though never cherished, yet to be made whole.
My tears can wipe themselves away, but I must save my soul.
Bare feet, run, lead me home, where I am Mother’s child,
And toward the pale rose sunset for a pretty little while.
If broken wings may carry dreams, and carry me to sleep,
Take me far away from love and tell me what it means.


The author's comments:
Writing is my passion … I hope you enjoy my poem!

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on Jul. 16 2009 at 6:13 am
AlyssaSunico DIAMOND, Taguig City, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Intelligence plus character is the goal of true education. - Dr. Martin Luther King Jr.
Music is in a higher revelatiuon than knowledge and wisdom - Ludwig Van Beethoven

This is a very nice poem. I have one a bit similar you should check it out. It's called Negative Love

on Jul. 10 2009 at 3:08 am
followmetonarnia BRONZE, Loxahatchee, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
People will love you or hate you for being different, but who's to say which way it will go. ~Shug

WOW! thats a rly rly amazing poem!! it was sooo wonderful and i can definately relate to it.

on Jul. 7 2009 at 3:26 am
Angels1031 BRONZE, Fort Worth, Texas
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i really enjoyed this poem, i can really understand the concept of it and i can definitely relate to this poem. plz check out some of my poems and tell me wat u think.

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on Jul. 6 2009 at 1:35 am
Chrissy_L GOLD, Ramsey, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
An eye for an eye leaves the whole world blind.

Stunning! This is absolutely fanatastic, you have no idea how jealous I am of your talents!

on Jul. 5 2009 at 8:14 pm
Only,I PLATINUM, Taylorville, Illinois
45 articles 17 photos 123 comments

Favorite Quote:
This too shall pass.

I love this, the emotion in this is raw and beautiful. Keep writing you have an amazing talent.

on Jul. 5 2009 at 5:16 pm
nessa_1121 SILVER, Harwich, Massachusetts
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i loved this i cna really relate nice job :)

on Jul. 5 2009 at 3:28 pm
FashionGuru DIAMOND, Manhattan, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"I don't do fashion, I am fashion." -Coco Chanel

Your poem is amazing! I love how it rhymes, alot of poems don't. But it makes so much sense and the descriptive words are so beautiful and bold. I"m absolutely in love with your work. Keep writing, your very talented.

on Jul. 5 2009 at 6:12 am
aidenfantastic BRONZE, Glen Burnie, Maryland
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This Is An AHMAZING!!! Poem. OMG, i have to put this on myspace or somewhere. i dont steal so you dont have to worry about that.

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on Jun. 27 2009 at 3:02 am
I love this. I can really relate. My life is your poem. Keep on writing!

on Jun. 14 2009 at 2:00 am
icguf615 BRONZE, Mission Viejo, California
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that was really great, very emotiuonal, awesome word pics

on Jun. 13 2009 at 8:12 pm
Gee.gee.lania BRONZE, Euclid, Ohio
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This is great!!!!!!! Keep writing please...... Nana.Riley:)

on May. 27 2009 at 11:22 pm
Eryn Powell BRONZE, Columbus, Ohio
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THIS IS WONDERFUL never never stop writing you are talented.

on May. 27 2009 at 9:32 pm
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's a mountain on a beach"-Unknown
"Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It's remarkable how often those two traits coincide."-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

I love-.. cherish this. It's nice work, sweet, gets the pictureemotions in your head. Awesome

on May. 27 2009 at 9:19 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
62 articles 1 photo 881 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

Awwww. Such a nice poem. The rhyme scheme is so well constructed. I love it! Keep up the good work!

~~~~~~~p.s. Could you please check my work out and maybe leave a comment or vote?? Congratulations on getting your work published!

Alexa. SILVER said...
on May. 27 2009 at 8:13 pm
Alexa. SILVER, Stockport, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Henry David Thoreau:

"Envy Is Ignorance."
"Imitation Is Suicide."

Woah this poem is amazing,



Alex

on May. 27 2009 at 7:52 pm
uniqke PLATINUM, Cleveland, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"The best way to call on yuor guardian angel,is to laugh."











-Michael Jackson

this is really nice

on May. 27 2009 at 7:07 pm
MistressoftheNIght SILVER, Dexter, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"We start dieing the monent we are conseved" ----- anoynimes

the poem is great keep writing

on May. 27 2009 at 2:55 pm
hurting_real_bad SILVER, Conneaut, Ohio
5 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Yes I love him. I love him more than anything else in this world and there is nothing that I would like better than to hold on to him forever. But I know it's not for the best. So no matter how much my heart is going to break, I've got to let him go so he can know just how much I love him. Maybe if I'm lucky, he'll come back, but if not, I can make it through this.”

i love it. Its beautiful and amazin great job

TJ_W. SILVER said...
on May. 27 2009 at 2:18 pm
TJ_W. SILVER, Spring Grove, Pennsylvania
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Great poem and great rhythem! XD Lisa, i do not agree with your comment.

on May. 19 2009 at 8:33 pm
hbwriter SILVER, Chapel Hill, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
It's time to trust my instincts, close my eyes, and leap!

great poem, keep up the good work! and, lisaD, I think love is found in the world, not in a book. Although I do love books.


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