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The Meaning of Love? MAG

November 8, 2008
By Kiana Baker GOLD, Alto, Texas
Kiana Baker GOLD, Alto, Texas
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The beating of my broken heart, now chained and locked away,
I hear much louder, through the night, than words we never say.
As hollow kisses turn to dust and fall against my skin,
I pray that I might find the strength to fall in love again.
Abandoned innocence, stripped away, discarded on the floor.
In the dirt, I bury hope that love leaves unlocked doors.
I am held, though never cherished, yet to be made whole.
My tears can wipe themselves away, but I must save my soul.
Bare feet, run, lead me home, where I am Mother’s child,
And toward the pale rose sunset for a pretty little while.
If broken wings may carry dreams, and carry me to sleep,
Take me far away from love and tell me what it means.


The author's comments:
Writing is my passion … I hope you enjoy my poem!

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on Apr. 12 2010 at 12:05 am
starsonmysleeves SILVER, San Anselmo, California
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there are some lovely lines in here. I especially like the image of you running back to be your "Mother's child."  very vivid. 

Lexaaa. BRONZE said...
on Apr. 9 2010 at 3:08 pm
Lexaaa. BRONZE, Marshfield, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
If everyone else's opinion is what matters, then why do you have your own?
-Nineteen Minutes; Jodi Picoult.

This is absolutly amazing. You are a great writer!

on Apr. 8 2010 at 3:27 pm
psychedelic_wAves, Austin, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Life sucks, but in a beautiful kind of way"~ Axl Rose quote

 2 THUMBS UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

GangstaEyes said...
on Mar. 23 2010 at 8:09 pm
This poem absolutely captured me and didn't let me go. It described more prefectly than I could ever have imagined exactly how love isn't all sunshine and happiness. Fantastic.

Vanna-Rae GOLD said...
on Mar. 21 2010 at 7:28 pm
Vanna-Rae GOLD, Bixby, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
To the well organized mind death is the next greatest adventure.

wonderful!! so pretty. your words flowed together so perfectly! keep writing hun!!

eRiCa1304 GOLD said...
on Mar. 21 2010 at 6:25 pm
eRiCa1304 GOLD, Sarasota, Florida
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check out my posts please!!!

kather BRONZE said...
on Mar. 21 2010 at 5:23 pm
kather BRONZE, Wilmette, Illinois
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Wow. I don't do poetry much, but maybe I shouldn't ever- probably leave the poetry to the real poets, you know? It's a compliment- you're very good, you know.

emo chick said...
on Mar. 21 2010 at 5:10 pm
wow ur poem i so good. dude i wish i were that good

on Mar. 21 2010 at 3:45 pm
starlight26 GOLD, Miramar, Florida
11 articles 7 photos 174 comments

Favorite Quote:
*life isnt about pretending to be something you're not. It about being who you are and finding someone
who loves every bit of it."

"Life's tradegy is that we get old too soon and wise too late"

Beautiful...is there anyhting else left to say? You said it all so magically!!! Great work. AMAZING

on Mar. 21 2010 at 3:06 pm
kellygurl365 SILVER, Cave Junction, Oregon
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this is a verry strong poem and it tugs on the part of all of our hearts that we try so hard to hide i love it! thank you for saying what is so hard for us all to say!

Riley141 GOLD said...
on Mar. 21 2010 at 12:46 pm
Riley141 GOLD, Yale, Michigan
13 articles 3 photos 145 comments

Favorite Quote:
" Always do right. This will gratifiy some people and astonish the rest." Mark Twain

Hey this was ahmazzing!! Keep writing! great detail!

nutmeg212 GOLD said...
on Mar. 21 2010 at 10:38 am
nutmeg212 GOLD, Coventry, Rhode Island
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't worry about it." -V.Z.

great job!!! keep on writing

on Mar. 21 2010 at 8:53 am
superswim_19 PLATINUM, Grand Haven, Michigan
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wow, that is amazing! i can totally relate to that, well, not in that poetic of a way.

on Mar. 17 2010 at 2:06 pm
MichaelTedder SILVER, Wilson, North Carolina
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ur a great writer. ur poems remind me of some of the things i have written.. :) look out for new postings from me. i think you'll be able to relate alot to "a love lost".. and ill definately look for ur new writings :))

on Mar. 16 2010 at 7:28 pm
sarahgrace BRONZE, Westminster, Maryland
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I really like your poem. The emotions are so strong and it carries a good message that many young people can relate to. You have a gift for writing! keep it up!

on Mar. 13 2010 at 3:22 pm
Fatalattractionxx SILVER, Rockfor, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
There are too many to choose.. but here\'s one: Care what others think, and you\'ll always be there prisoner.

This is great!

on Mar. 8 2010 at 11:43 am
lilsweetcake95, Parkesburg, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Draw a line and live above it.

I have never read one of these before. This is good because to me it seems like someone had had this happened to them before and they wanted to let people know. This person truly has a gift to themselves and knows how to write.

on Mar. 4 2010 at 4:55 pm
that was beautiful you've got a gift for writing thanks for sharing

on Mar. 3 2010 at 11:50 am
xxbri14xx BRONZE, In, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
what doesnt kill us...makes us stronger<3

this poem is amazing(: i lovee it...<3

bmmskh said...
on Mar. 2 2010 at 10:29 am
omg this is really good i think u should keep righting more poems like this one great job.......=)