Hear my Silent Screams...

May 1, 2013
By Lovely346 BRONZE, TUCSON, Arizona
Lovely346 BRONZE, TUCSON, Arizona
2 articles 30 photos 56 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When the power of love overcomes the Love of power, the world will know peace"


I try to be happy… I really do
But I just cannot live without you
My heart is torn
My love is broken
There is just too many words unspoken
Countless days of endless pain
Nothing left for me to gain
I’m just so tired of the tears
waiting here in constant fear
No one there to hold me tight
To many sleepless nights
I look in the mirror every day
Just to see a reflection that’s fading away
I scream but they cannot hear
My silent cries start to disappear
This pain constricts without end
I don’t know how much longer I can pretend
I continue for the hope someone may see
That I’m trapped in a box without a key
Though I'm left here
With no one to care
Alone with the urge to just give in..
I hope to be forgiven of my sin
In the mean time I’ll be here..
Knowing no one shall ever care
So I will put on a smile and you will dismiss
The one who no one may ever miss


The author's comments:
This is the first poem I have ever written... tell me what you think.
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on May. 10 2013 at 3:44 pm
Stuck_In_Madness BRONZE, Lake Mary, Florida
4 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You can't reach the top without once starting from the bottom."

This was very good especially for your first write. All the criticism i have is check the syllables in each line to check your rhthym to make it flow better.

on May. 6 2013 at 10:10 am
Desiree1997 BRONZE, Connersville, Indiana
4 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
we have nothing to fear but fear itself.

i really like the poems on here they are really good they have good meaning to it and some of them remind me of my friends relationship with her boyfriend.


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