our stars( the sun)

January 25, 2013
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Stars are very bright.
very, very, bright.
Our sun is one.
one look, your done.
Our stars are very bright!

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CaptainK said...
Feb. 5, 2013 at 5:11 pm
Stars are bright, aren't they? Good job! I loved it! It's short and sweet and to the point.
Larsen replied...
Feb. 6, 2013 at 2:40 pm
thank you! :) you should also check out my other poem about lies and myths. it is called "Lies are Lies"  
CaptainK replied...
Feb. 6, 2013 at 7:06 pm
Oh, I certainly will!
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