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Stars are very bright.
very, very, bright.
Our sun is one.
one look, your done.
Our stars are very bright!




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CaptainKThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 5 at 5:11 pm:
Stars are bright, aren't they? Good job! I loved it! It's short and sweet and to the point.
 
Larsen replied...
Feb. 6 at 2:40 pm :
thank you! :) you should also check out my other poem about lies and myths. it is called "Lies are Lies"  
 
CaptainKThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 6 at 7:06 pm :
Oh, I certainly will!
 
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