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A mother is special
She your one true friend
She’ll always be with you
She’ll help you see it through to the end
A mother’s love is unique
It compares to nothing on this earth
Her love helps guide you
It’s been like that since birth
A mother kiss heals all
It helps cure the pain
Even from the nastiest fall
A mother can’t be replaced
Because she is so special



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love525 said...
Dec. 15, 2012 at 11:56 pm:
i...i really have nun to say cuz i didnt really have a mother growing up really she was a well she lived in th streets and did deugs an would come to visit me in my brothers sometimes but only to get some money frum us or food r a place to stay for a while then she would leave for onother month..so yeah sometimes i dont think she even give a chizz bout us..  
 
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hotchicky101 said...
Dec. 15, 2012 at 11:51 pm:
creative :D
 
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KnitsandPurls said...
Dec. 15, 2012 at 6:26 pm:
I can tell that your emotions went into this poem. I can feel what you are trying to convey, and you used some powerful words. On a more constructive note, there are some problems with the number of syllables per line. The format has a ways to go before it is a true limerick. Try reading your poem aloud and see which parts flow better than others. Also, (and this is something I have to work on in my own poetry as well) more punctuation would be a good idea. It would make the poem clearer. ... (more »)
 
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