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My heart is weak
Outlook on life is bleak
Exhausted from carrying my heavy heart
I’m wounded heart ripped apart
My soul weeps
My heart bleeds
I’m no longer who I use to be
I’m completely changed after what happened to me
I was transformed when you walked out of my life
I haven’t been quit the same since that night
My heart is still far from being strong
I still don’t get it what I did so wrong
Because of you my heart is weak
My outlook on life is bleak
I am so tired of being blue
It is all because of one reason……….you
I made my first mistake when I asked you out
Ending it then would have been the safest route
Too bad we didn’t end it early
Instead we rushed it in a hurry
Slowly my heart is forgetting your affection
And slowly I’m beginning to lose my connection
With reality
Wishing for mortality
If only death would knock at my door
I’d lose all feelings for the ungrateful little w****



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ShadowpomgurlThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 18, 2012 at 12:10 pm:
that was good! i liked the last line the most, heehee! ;)
 
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country-cuteyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 14, 2012 at 2:59 pm:
wow u have some awsome talent there!!!!!! ur gonna be famous someday for ur work and i am gonna be ur biggest fan :D keep on writing!
 
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TheUnwantedTRUTHThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 13, 2012 at 12:24 pm:
hrmm its good im not a big fan of romance poems  
 
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sadness908This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 9, 2012 at 9:16 pm:
o michael that was...... sad and awsome your really good. um im srry  
 
RomanceHeroThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Dec. 9, 2012 at 9:18 pm :
sorry for what?
 
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