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Broken for so long, I'm crumbling
About to shatter into a million pieces,
I awaken from my nightmares, as all time ceases

As fragile as a glass vase, please don't touch
My Heart continuously aches, it's just too much.

Always lonely, yet never alone
Scared to break away
but i need to leave my safe zone

My eyes still red, my wrists still scarred
I realize my fears, as I stare into a mirrored shard



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nocommentisacomment said...
Nov. 27, 2012 at 1:16 pm:
I love how this poem is put togeather, I can think of a good image of a destroyed girl. Maybe put more detail and describe why she is broken.
 
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PadoodalleeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 26, 2012 at 4:10 pm:
This is a very beautiful poem. You did a great job of describing the emotions and rhyming well. Both together is usually pretty hard to do, and I'm impressed with the word choice.
 
Rae-LynnThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 29, 2012 at 11:24 pm :
Thank you(: I appreciate it.
 
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