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A Flaw of Love

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Please stop me from crying,
Help me win this fight
Whisper to the wind,the water,
The cherry blossoms of the night
Help my smile awake,
With a joy unsurpassed
Even if such gentle things,
Were never meant to last
I remember all the feelings,
You gave me
And when i think of you,
My soul flies free
Even while my heart,
Aches deeply
Memories of you let me,
Treat others sweetly <3





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A.Marcus This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 1, 2016 at 1:27 pm
This is good and super expressive! I loved it!
 
Babe_Angel said...
Oct. 29, 2012 at 8:12 pm
oh...that's sweet...!! how nice, you and her goes to the same school?
 
XxElfen_LiedxXThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 1, 2012 at 7:35 am
yup, were bffs
 
Jordan-Tyler replied...
Nov. 1, 2012 at 2:37 pm
yup            
 
Jordan-Tyler said...
Oct. 29, 2012 at 9:11 am
dont worry he knows now, and he thought it was cute. lol. she told me today.
 
Babe_Angel said...
Oct. 26, 2012 at 12:05 am
so jealous, I wish I can write poem like you. He must be very lucky
 
XxElfen_LiedxXThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Oct. 26, 2012 at 7:16 pm
LOLZ he doesnt know it but i wont tell him about it either! ;)
 
Babe_Angel replied...
Oct. 28, 2012 at 11:52 pm
You should tell him, let he know what's on your mind. Who knows, maybe he's thinking the same too. How do you met him? Are you guy in the same school?
 
XxElfen_LiedxXThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 1, 2012 at 7:28 am
im really embarassed that he knows  
 
Babe_Angel said...
Oct. 24, 2012 at 11:59 pm
This is a pretty nice poem. I was wondering who is the lucky guy?
 
XxElfen_LiedxXThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Oct. 25, 2012 at 7:28 am
;) not telling ;P
 
Jordan-Tyler replied...
Oct. 26, 2012 at 5:24 pm
lol. really tracy lol
 
Jordan-Tyler said...
Oct. 24, 2012 at 8:50 pm
you are an amazing writer tracy.  see you at school tommorow lol.
 
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