Its time

September 27, 2012
By joshua_w PLATINUM, Portsmouth, Virginia
joshua_w PLATINUM, Portsmouth, Virginia
34 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"wars come and go but my soldiers stay eternal" -2 pac
"my heart is a box and only you have the key to it"


thinking of life and the disappointment i give
i still have a life to live
all i wanna do in life is win
leave behind all the sin

all I've done is shown that i don't care
like i had no one that was there
spit at everyone who ever stared
for me to give kindness was rare

I've done a lot of stupid things in my days
hurt a lot of people with my ways
all I've done is smoke,drink and I'm always trying a new drug
I'm trying to get out of the hole I've dug

i want to forget this place,gain a new face
begin a new life,or maybe just go back in tI'me
just push the rewind,if i could just leave
it would be be fine

its time to make a change
stop acting so strange
keep everything good in range

i do not want to forget what kept me moving
what made me keep strolling
what has always had me rolling

this is my life and its time
I'm telling you in this rhyme
it is time.



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on Feb. 20 2013 at 3:31 pm
joshua_w PLATINUM, Portsmouth, Virginia
34 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"wars come and go but my soldiers stay eternal" -2 pac
"my heart is a box and only you have the key to it"

thank you for your recommendations guys

on Oct. 19 2012 at 10:59 pm
joshua_w PLATINUM, Portsmouth, Virginia
34 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"wars come and go but my soldiers stay eternal" -2 pac
"my heart is a box and only you have the key to it"

thanx for the recommendation lol ill start editing a lil better and thanku i love to write...u telling e that makes  me wanna write more ha

Libby M. said...
on Oct. 11 2012 at 6:44 am
I thought this was great! I loved the message and the storyline it portrayed but some of the rhyming words placed at the end of each line sound like they were put there only because they rhymed, and it lessened the effect of the mood a bit. Try concentrating on finding words that both rhyme AND fit (:

on Oct. 7 2012 at 10:47 pm
Bradical BRONZE, Morgantown, West Virginia
2 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
“I went to the woods because I wanted to live deliberately, I wanted to live deep and suck out all the marrow of life, To put to rout all that was not life and not when I had come to die Discover that I had not lived.” --Henry David Thoreau

Use your past to empower yourself for a better future. This is really great, I hope you realize that. You have talent. One recommendation: capitalize your 'I's


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