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thinking of life and the disappointment i give
i still have a life to live
all i wanna do in life is win
leave behind all the sin

all I've done is shown that i don't care
like i had no one that was there
spit at everyone who ever stared
for me to give kindness was rare

I've done a lot of stupid things in my days
hurt a lot of people with my ways
all I've done is smoke,drink and I'm always trying a new drug
I'm trying to get out of the hole I've dug

i want to forget this place,gain a new face
begin a new life,or maybe just go back in tI'me
just push the rewind,if i could just leave
it would be be fine

its time to make a change
stop acting so strange
keep everything good in range

i do not want to forget what kept me moving
what made me keep strolling
what has always had me rolling

this is my life and its time
I'm telling you in this rhyme
it is time.



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joshua_wThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 20, 2013 at 3:31 pm:
thank you for your recommendations guys
 
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joshua_wThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 19, 2012 at 10:59 pm:
thanx for the recommendation lol ill start editing a lil better and thanku i love to write...u telling e that makes  me wanna write more ha
 
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Libby M. said...
Oct. 11, 2012 at 6:44 am:
I thought this was great! I loved the message and the storyline it portrayed but some of the rhyming words placed at the end of each line sound like they were put there only because they rhymed, and it lessened the effect of the mood a bit. Try concentrating on finding words that both rhyme AND fit (:
 
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Bradical said...
Oct. 7, 2012 at 10:47 pm:
Use your past to empower yourself for a better future. This is really great, I hope you realize that. You have talent. One recommendation: capitalize your 'I's
 
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