demon

September 21, 2012
By drakodragonheart SILVER, Bossier City, Louisiana
drakodragonheart SILVER, Bossier City, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
put an animal in a cage an he is not content but give the animal the choice of freedom an he is content


can you feel me can you see me
can you feel the rage inside of me
can you see the demon with in me
I'm so lost an broken so weak & frail
this wasn't supposed to happen to me
you broke him out of his prison
an now i can't control him
i don't see how you can say it'll be alright
for he's tearing me from the inside out
he wants what he can't have
there's a war raging with in me can you feel me tremble
can you not see the pain in my eyes
what have you done to me
I'm so lost an broken so weak an frail
i need help to control the demon
i can't take this pain anymore
I'm tired of feeling so helpless
he won't control me anymore
can you feel me can you see me
can you feel my strength returning
can you see me stand tall again
i feel so much better
i see so much clearer
an i can feel you tremble
i can see the fear in your eyes what have i done
have i really become the demon
an once again i feel
so lost an broken so helpless
leave me an my demon alone
if i really scare you that much
for there is no hope for me
i have become the demon


The author's comments:
well its about a struggle with in an the fact that no matter how hard some friends see you struggle there afraid to help

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on Mar. 18 2014 at 11:29 am
drakodragonheart SILVER, Bossier City, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
put an animal in a cage an he is not content but give the animal the choice of freedom an he is content

thanks everyone i didnt think for my first work it would take off so stay tunned im going to upload my journal soon

on Oct. 1 2012 at 9:44 am
drakodragonheart SILVER, Bossier City, Louisiana
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put an animal in a cage an he is not content but give the animal the choice of freedom an he is content

hey thanks it means alot to me since its my first work on this site

LunaLives GOLD said...
on Sep. 30 2012 at 7:59 am
LunaLives GOLD, South Bend, Indiana
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Because I can!-Me "Life is a choice and death is a decision"-Lil Wayne

It said a lot. And it made me think of my struggles and how when I thought there was no way out I always found one. But it took a lot of help from the people around me. I love the message you're sending.

on Sep. 25 2012 at 8:24 am
Photographywonder PLATINUM, Unfortunetly, Texas
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"You can't wait for inspiration to come to you, you have to go at it with a club"
"Can anything be sadder than work unfinished? Yes; work never begun"
"Creativity is allowing yourself to make mistakes.Art is knowing which ones to keep"-Scott Adams

I love this poem. It has so much feeling and thought in it! Great job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
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