Hot and Cold

May 31, 2012
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One day you’re on,
one day you’re off.
One day you’re right,
one day I’m wrong.
One day you’re nice,
one day you’re not.
One day it’s “I’ll call you”,
the next it’s, “I forgot.”
One day It’s “I’ll be with you.”
One day it’s “I won’t.”
One day it’s “I love you,”
and today it’s “I don’t.”





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CameandgonesmartyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 6, 2012 at 11:09 pm

I actually love the simplicity of this.

It was to the point, and the rhyme, especially at the end seems so effortless

good job

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