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Hot and Cold

May 31, 2012
By halee.b SILVER, Boyne City, Michigan
halee.b SILVER, Boyne City, Michigan
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One day you’re on,
one day you’re off.
One day you’re right,
one day I’m wrong.
One day you’re nice,
one day you’re not.
One day it’s “I’ll call you”,
the next it’s, “I forgot.”
One day It’s “I’ll be with you.”
One day it’s “I won’t.”
One day it’s “I love you,”
and today it’s “I don’t.”


The author's comments:
Boyfriend issues.

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on Jun. 6 2012 at 11:09 pm
Cameandgonesmarty ELITE, North Vancouver, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"One day, your life will flash before your eyes; make sure it's worth watching."

I actually love the simplicity of this.

It was to the point, and the rhyme, especially at the end seems so effortless

good job

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