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Majestic Beauty

“Dear horse, majestic creature.” I smile and sighed
As he and I sauntered through our daily ride
My heart grew warm
As we braved the storm
And on the way home I cried.



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Josika.Nav said...
May 27, 2012 at 10:27 am:
hey! very very vute. i like the natural flow, it did not seem even a little bit forced. 5/5 from me too. great work and keep writing :D
 
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Behind_a_Plastic_Smile said...
May 22, 2012 at 11:35 pm:
wow if was cute and then that last line just hit it home 5/5
 
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