Going Fishin'

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The man decided to go fishing
To catch a keeper is what he was wishing
He needed dinner
For he was getting thinner
Then to all his friends some fish stew he was dishing





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Inferno#21 said...
May 4, 2012 at 10:46 am
This was a very catchy and fun limerick and i enjoyed it. The rhythm was perfect and that really topped it off.  Great job keep writing!
 
Potatoes said...
Apr. 30, 2012 at 10:36 am
I love your writing. I noticed the rhythm scheme in your piece. I think a little more figurative language could help you out. Great job though.
 
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