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The Moon, it hangs, it dangles in the sky,
do i want to dangle? Well, do i?
It pulls and it pushes the tides on the shore,
it seems to shine light out from it's core,
Does the Moon dangle? I don't think it does.
it chooses to fly, to soar, because-
it will not dangle, or be pushed or be pulled,
it's like the Sun, only it's been cooled,
Will you be the Moon? And float in the sky?
Or will you sit on the ground, refusing to fly?




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Jeast10This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 30, 2011 at 6:07 pm:
well, thank you sooo much! this was only my second poem, but if you write with your heart, it doesnt matter who likes it... do it for the joy of it!
 
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thomakab14 said...
Nov. 29, 2011 at 7:45 pm:
I really like this! I wish I could make my rhymes better....more like this. =/
 
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