The View This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

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You've got me smiling nonstop,
Laughing like a child
You are beautiful, wonderful,
Free-spirited and wild

I'd climb a mountain
As long as you are there
And when we're up
I'll stop and stare

Not at the trees
Or at the view
But at the stunningly breathtaking,
Beautiful you.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.






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Godinspiresher43 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 17, 2014 at 6:33 pm
THis is so pretty! I love this! Great job! :)
 
WaffleOcean2934 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 5, 2013 at 10:45 am
I really like this poem!  I think it has a great rhythm and flow to it.  Nice work on it!  :)
 
Cameandgonesmarty This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Jan. 5, 2013 at 6:08 pm
Thank you!!!
 
lovemenot said...
Mar. 6, 2012 at 11:26 pm
This piece is amazing. Simple but refined, perfect. I also admire the way you made the view to be a person. Well done.
 
Cameandgonesmarty This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Mar. 7, 2012 at 2:17 pm
thank you! means a lot!
 
beautifulspirit This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 26, 2012 at 5:24 pm
I love the way you personified the view as a person~ this describes just the way a beautiful view can make someone feel.
 
Cameandgonesmarty This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Mar. 7, 2012 at 2:16 pm
thank you so much
 
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