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September 4, 2011
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I pick up a pen and hold it to my paper
I hear the words I love you
And they couldn’t be faker
I write down my thoughts
Feeling too shamed
To say them out loud
And hear the voice of my pain
From the first time it hurt
To the times I was numb
I fell to the dirt
And just watched the blood run
The feeling I felt
While I sat on the ground
Shut off my brain
And made my heart pound
I felt so at ease, so relaxed, and tranquil
A little piece of metal
Meant I need not to kill
It shut off the feelings, the emotions I had
The thoughts in my head
That made my heart sad
The world around me just stops for a while
Then I return
With a broken little smile
When the numbness is gone
And so is the pain
The color comes back
I feel my hands again

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Posion.Ivyy. said...
Oct. 2, 2011 at 8:15 pm
Your emotinal expression is great.
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Sept. 16, 2011 at 10:44 pm
Love love love the emotion behind this
AlwaysDanceInTheRain said...
Sept. 16, 2011 at 3:59 pm
I can totally relate! Greata job expressing the emotions :)
CarolinaBoy23 said...
Sept. 13, 2011 at 5:31 pm
This is great. You explained everything very well. You can feel the pain your expressing in it. I really like this. Could you read my poems i have one that just came out and another thats about to
Luciano said...
Sept. 13, 2011 at 11:57 am
Your poem made a lot of sence to me it,I feel it resembles my life I love your really great it this never quite
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