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Fat Dog

There once was a cute little dog
But he tended to eat like a hog
And then just like that
He became very fat
And he needed to go on a jog



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booklover04 said...
Jul. 14, 2011 at 4:17 pm
a very cute poem :) but maybe you want to add to it more? add in some sensory details to make it stand out? I dont know just a thought....lol
 
RFrocker23 said...
Jul. 14, 2011 at 12:03 pm
Aww so cute. It made me laugh. Keep it up.
 
Mystiecub said...
Jul. 11, 2011 at 6:23 pm
this is a cute little poem, reminds me of one i wrote when i was a little kid xD good job
 
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