The tale of him and her

June 26, 2011
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As he sat there and lied
she broke down and cried.
The feeling of the other girls touch
the way the boy said he wouldnt do such.
He kissed her neck and grinned
The victim had lost, there was no such win.
She could feel his heart beat in her chest
her sight was his view of the other girls breast.
"Love" no longer existed, it died.
The broken girl had semed to have lost her mind
As the sounds and images played again and again.
The boy was just creating a bigger sin.
Caress her leg, a cut was born.
The feeling of your heart being torn.
The pleasure of another's pain.
The broken girl had lost everything she gained.
Feeling like she was lost
the feeling of frost.
The touch of the dead
she laid in her bed,
Waiting for his lies.





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LyricalBeauty said...
Jul. 19, 2011 at 12:19 pm

Nicely done! I could sense the pain in the narrator's tone. Great job(=

If you can, please check out my poems. Comments/Rates are always appreciated. Thanks!(=

 
Danealle said...
Jul. 8, 2011 at 3:59 pm
This is very well written! I feel the pain from this poem. 
 
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