May 20, 2011
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A layer of protection
like a layer of gold
but why does it have to be
so fake and so cold.

So many stories
and so many lies
but it just ends with friends
saying goodbyes.

It's so hard to tell
what's true and what's not
it's because of that mask
that I have forgot.

You've built up a wall of safety
a refuge
but how can a lie so little
build up something so huge?

Now, if you please look away
as I hide my face in shame
for I, too, have a mask
that looks just the same.

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Odessa_Sterling00 said...
Jul. 28, 2011 at 2:17 pm
It was good, just a few parts didn't seem to flow right.  
CallMeMrs.Batman replied...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 11:51 pm
Odessa_Sterling00: Yeah. I'm not too good with poetry but I wrote this because it described perfectly the situation I was going through. I don't normally write poetry for fun. lol. :)
Alon_Freevoice said...
Jul. 27, 2011 at 4:17 am
Aw. I wear masks too sometimes. And I usually hate doing so. Great poem though... :)))
CallMeMrs.Batman replied...
Jul. 27, 2011 at 11:56 pm
Alon_Freevoice: Thanks for the feedback! I'm glad you could relate! :)
CallMeMrs.Batman said...
Jul. 25, 2011 at 1:02 am

CarrieAnn13- GRRRR! Thank you for pointing that out. It really irritates me when I leave out little thing like that. lol. Thanks! :)

ttlove21- dont ever let MY poetry make you question YOUR poetry lol. yours is much better then mine lol. Thanks, though! :) <3 Miss you! Just 30 more days until school starts again!

ttlove21 said...
Jul. 25, 2011 at 12:09 am
i love this soo much it makes me question my writing lol
CarrieAnn13 said...
Jul. 24, 2011 at 2:33 pm
Wow!  I love the rhyming scheme here and the message in this poem.  Since you used a question mark later on, you might want to put a question mark after 'so fake and so cold'.
musicispassion said...
Jul. 10, 2011 at 1:36 pm
dang u make me feel bad but i really like this good job reesa
OfTheUnknown replied...
Jul. 10, 2011 at 4:29 pm
ahaa woww thanks ren
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