Rearview Mirror

February 14, 2011
The roads by your house
Bring back thoughts of me and you
And force me to remember
Everything you put me through

You took the best of me
Stole the light behind my smile
Showed me how cruel love could be
And tossed my heart into your pile

As I drive past your street
The tears begin to fall
And I wonder who I’d be
If we had never met at all

Memories flow through my mind
Like a river, running wild
They sneak up from behind
With no escape, my thoughts defiled

In the safety of my car
I let my mind run free
I wonder how, and where you are
And if you ever think of me

The good and the bad
We’ve been through it all
You’re the best (and worst) I’ve had
You showed me how hard I could fall

But it’s time to put away the past
There’s nothing to be said
I must ignore the rearview mirror
And look to what’s ahead

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remorseispower said...
Mar. 19, 2011 at 9:11 pm
this is an amazing peice i really love the story to it!
Veronique replied...
Mar. 19, 2011 at 9:29 pm
thank you!(: if there are any of yours that you would like me to comment on just let me know(:
remorseispower replied...
Mar. 19, 2011 at 10:09 pm
could you take a look at my poem in forums its called "Changes in a Girl's Heart" thanks!
Veronique replied...
Mar. 19, 2011 at 11:03 pm
yes, definitely!(:
Veronique replied...
Mar. 19, 2011 at 11:32 pm
so i am looking for your poem, and i cant find it anywhere. do you think you can send me a link? or did you just post it? i will check the recent forum posts one more time(:
remorseispower replied...
Mar. 19, 2011 at 11:41 pm

i posted it today! :( it has no veiws so look for the zero then my screen name


Veronique said...
Mar. 5, 2011 at 9:27 pm
Drew p: thank you(: Oh also, if you guys rate please give me feedback as to what i can do to improve(: thanks!
Drew P. said...
Mar. 4, 2011 at 5:17 pm
This is really good, I like the symbolism you use throughout the piece, as well as the way you rhyme things. (You had posted on my poem Bittersweet Apology, thanks for directing me to this poem, its really good)
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