alone in the snow

December 5, 2010
By arrowood BRONZE, Warfield, Kentucky
arrowood BRONZE, Warfield, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
be the change you wish to see in the world
-ghandi


walking in the snow no shoes on my feet, blood trails behind put the pain is so sweet, making my path through this downpour of snow, taking my time as there's nowhere to go, walking alone just the wind by my side, nowhere to run nowhere to hide,as i look around all i see is white, my chances of living are nowhere in sight, i lay on the ground the snow is my blanket, i don't think i'm going to make it.



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on Dec. 23 2010 at 12:37 pm
MakeItShine SILVER, Pembroke Pines, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
“I believe in Christianity as I believe that the sun has risen: not only because I see it, but because by it I see everything else.”
~C.S. Lewis.

This is raw, deep and powerful. Work on punctuation to make it easier to read to help the flow a bit. But the rhythm is wonderful, the meaning is beautiful, and the overall effect it has is powerful. Good work.




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