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December 5, 2010
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walking in the snow no shoes on my feet, blood trails behind put the pain is so sweet, making my path through this downpour of snow, taking my time as there's nowhere to go, walking alone just the wind by my side, nowhere to run nowhere to hide,as i look around all i see is white, my chances of living are nowhere in sight, i lay on the ground the snow is my blanket, i don't think i'm going to make it.





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MakeItShine said...
Dec. 23, 2010 at 12:37 pm
This is raw, deep and powerful. Work on punctuation to make it easier to read to help the flow a bit. But the rhythm is wonderful, the meaning is beautiful, and the overall effect it has is powerful. Good work.
 
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