Where the Sad Things Hide

this is short and sweet and very dramatic, all around a great poem :) please check out my work and comment, thanks!

this is really wonderful, u delighted my eyes with your poem (that was me TRYING to sound wierd) please read rate and comment on my poem Black Fire, id appreciate it!!

This is beautiful i really enjoyed

"The water it stained as it fell There is where the sad things dwell " Great lines love the poem

I Love this poem so much! Can you take a look at my poem Siren Lies? Thanks!

Solid imagery~ I like it so much!

I love! That's all I can say :D

This is really great!! It was heartfelt and understandable!! Keep up the amazing work!!:D

I agree! This piece is really amazing. I liked how it was emotional and could be understood by both readers and poet. Keep writing! :)

i love this poem it make sense and made me almost cry :')

greatt imagess and great emotion.

This poem is wholly astonishing with the images painted, the sincerity of the emotion and the overall message. Great work. Looking forward to reading more of your stuff!

Beautiful. :)

i LOVE this!

This is lovely, the word choice is very beautiful and the whole poem makes you want to keep reading it forever.

good poem. and nice picture to match.

omg i can relate to this! its so beautiful!!

this is really beautiful

I think this is beautiful and after a break up with my first love, it makes me feel better! :)

This makes me feel sad to whoever this has happened to. The 'crime' that you speak of, refers to cheating I believe and if I’m right then something like that would always be remembered or how you said 'stained'. This poem is commendable to the broken hearts and the situations that have occurred similar to this. A limerick like this could touch someone deeply because it’s very precise of what it’s about. Although it is depressing, it’s a wonderful poem to read.

jennie+adam forever

Aren't limericks supposed to be funny/light-hearted?

But forget that, it's a great poem. I love the emotion.

This was really great. I loved it=) So much emotion and imagery

Writing out of grief nd sadness is the best because you have so much feeling, and this I could really imagine every detail. I really pictured the whole thing. It is great (:

really beautiful and well written. i like how the ryming isnt too obvious but that it is there to make it flow

this is truly amazing :]

ur amazing!! ur like a poetry goddess!! i love this poem! keep writing plz! and read my stuff 2..i would love another poet's opinion!

that was amazing!

Enchanting. The whole scheme rings in my mind with wonder.

it was really good.  Good rhyming :)

This is really good! ^-^

in the title it says sad things hide, where in the article it says sad things dwell? this is really good, i just thought id mention that.:)

this is truly beautiful. i can feel the emotion. keep writing

I have fallen in love with your poem! This is so beautiful...and beautifully written. A++++++++++++++++++++

amazing. breathtaking. i can almost feel the emotion bursting from my computer screen :) im speechless....wow! 5 stars :) check out some of my work if you could, i would love your opinion. great job with this piece....it's amazing :)

I like this poem because it's deep and I like deep and passionate things. To me, good poems are the ones you really have to grasp the meaning of, in order to understand.
SO great job !

I thought that was pretty. I really liked it, even though it made me really sad.

that was deep i liked it you show a lot of passion in your writting....

Hey,
VERY nicely written!!!

That was real nice. I like the vivid detail and its just real touching

i loved it,! ive had many boy troubles in he past weeks im an average weirdo, can be girly sorta and guyish but for some reason im small, little boney and i have 4 guys chasing after me and i dont understand why? theyd like me! and just so mnay lies, broken promises through my life so this speaks to me GOOD JOB

That was just beautiful.

that was ssssoooo good! i love it! it made me cry, my best friend is having boy troubble, so it reminded me of her.

that was amazing!

this poem reminds me of new moon by stephanie meyer author of the twilight series. this is a really great poem and i hope you make a living off of what you do!