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I'm Sorry

October 13, 2010
By Femme-Fatale GOLD, Nashville, Tennessee
Femme-Fatale GOLD, Nashville, Tennessee
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I’m sorry
I’m sorry i’m not the girl you knew
i’m sorry that you never had a clue
that this girl was here that she could breathe
and hate and hurt and yell and seethe
i’m sorry you fell in love with me
when i was still innocent and free
and i wish that you’d have seen
who was hiding behind the scenes
but its too late now
got to up and take my bow
that once again i’ve proved
that once i’m gone i can’t be moved
from off the edge, i’d like to tempt
my gravity with my contempt
but i’m still scared enough to stop
before my foot hits the drop
just hope i can still pull back
when i find that courage i lack
before its too late
and there’s no time left to wait


The author's comments:
This was written after a particularly nasty break-up of mine, my ex and I were fighting, and he was saying how he missed how I used to be, he missed my innocence. I wrote this to rebel, to apologize.

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on Nov. 1 2010 at 7:28 pm
Femme-Fatale GOLD, Nashville, Tennessee
12 articles 0 photos 13 comments
Oh, I know, not a problem, haha

on Nov. 1 2010 at 10:08 am
erikampell SILVER, Willow Branch, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"If at first you dont suceed, dont quit, push yourself" / "Push yourself, push yourself to the limit"

haha well i twas a joke so dont worry

on Oct. 30 2010 at 8:49 am
Femme-Fatale GOLD, Nashville, Tennessee
12 articles 0 photos 13 comments
thank you, that means a lot. I love writing, and its always been my way of getting everything out.

on Oct. 29 2010 at 3:08 pm
blondie707 SILVER, Eureka, California
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Favorite Quote:
no boy is worth your tears and the one who is wont make you cry.

wow...this poem really touches the heart it is very amazing poem.your really good at it.keep writing you would be great at writing books of poetry.

on Oct. 28 2010 at 7:17 pm
Femme-Fatale GOLD, Nashville, Tennessee
12 articles 0 photos 13 comments
thanks so much! haha, and trust me, he's probably not your type :P

on Oct. 28 2010 at 12:48 pm
erikampell SILVER, Willow Branch, Indiana
9 articles 4 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If at first you dont suceed, dont quit, push yourself" / "Push yourself, push yourself to the limit"

hook me up with him. haha just kidding. this poem is really emotional and it is close to my heart. i love your style of writting. great job.


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