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The rain came pouring
As they lay snoring
Deep in dreams
Of shouting and screams
Children crying, bridges falling
Cars crashing, French fries crawling
People flying
People dying
All through the night
They toss and turn in fright
Dreams can be scary, wonderful places
So many new and exciting faces
Terrifying, beautiful, scary and bright
All of these things create a fight
Reality, dreams, reality, dreams
Your head screaming with what’s right and wrong
Going on for far too long
Tossing and turning late at night
Waking up from a terrible flight
Dreams become reality
Reality becomes a dream.

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IndiloveThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 8, 2012 at 7:36 am:
I absolutly love this!!! I love your style and your ideas and how you tied in reality and dreams this is awesome great work! check out some of mine please:)
 
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Skillz said...
Sept. 9, 2011 at 10:56 am:
This is very interesting I like the contrast you made with reality and dreams.
 
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JesusFreack10101 said...
Apr. 13, 2011 at 8:31 pm:
I like it a lot but it kinda sounds unfinished ... :) keep up the good work!
 
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kvater said...
Apr. 6, 2011 at 12:11 pm:
i liked this poem and i liked how it rymes
 
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BreeTayler This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 13, 2010 at 8:08 pm:
I liked it... It was just all very confusing in a not-so-confusig way? Ha but I'm thinking it can be tweaked a little to make it EVEN better.
 
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bmmsDW said...
Mar. 2, 2010 at 9:40 am:
I think it needs work on a little i didnt realy get it but keep it up
 
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lisa92 said...
Jan. 14, 2010 at 10:27 am:
the poem was real deep lots of meaning and loved the last2lines this was a real good poem.... keep it up...!
 
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miz.pretty.yung.thang said...
Dec. 24, 2009 at 10:31 pm:
YOU HAVE TALENT... GREAT POEM.. I LOVE IT
 
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beddastella2@aim.com said...
Apr. 18, 2009 at 7:47 am:
love the last two lines of your peom!! Great ryming!! I love it!! Great peom!!
 
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blingblang4eva said...
Mar. 4, 2009 at 3:32 am:
love this :0 rly rly good.
 
JesusIsMySavior777This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 6, 2010 at 1:50 pm :

loved it! it takes such emotion and concentration to make a poem rhyme without well it just rambling on. but u perfected this! SO BEAUTIFUL!!!!

ps: plz check my writin out and see if itz any good whenever u hav a sec JLU

 
snickericecream replied...
Aug. 5, 2011 at 2:07 am :
amazing can you guys do me a favor nd look at my work and tell me if you like it 
 
Scribbleaway.This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 25 at 2:16 am :
amazingg. :D 
 
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